write another chapter! please? :)

WOW! WOW! WOW! Your fanfic is great!

looking forward for more great work like this.

Keep it up!

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Anna Sun

Spank you very much!

It's visible that author is polish, or has strong connections in this country, as he knows it quite well.

Diana-You've done it again with Obvious. Great setting. You seem to have an affinity for the language too . I like the fact that Syd's feeling of invulnerability was shattered with this mission. However, would she really handle this without Dixon or another partner? That was my only nit in an otherwise great story.

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Ya' know.. You just keep getting better with every sentence you write.. You are an amazing writer.

This was really great. :)

Very nice! Good action, good plot, and a nice way of showing insight into Syd's fears. I really enjoyed it!

Interesting story. Good writing. Like the idea of it being set in poland.

I originally only read this because it takes place in Poland (I have a thing for the country), and was pleasantly surprised. It was a nice companion to my Subway lunch. :o) You have a good pace with the story. It moved along very nicely, and I enjoyed it very much. Good job!