The story should be 1 of my favorite but it can never be because of the immorality a boy to boy relationship is disguting

Of course, somebody's got to read this... Please finish it. And if you can, please make a sequel! X3

Still love it

I don't care what u say. This is AWSOME *says in a sing song voice*
FINISH IT OR SUFFER MY WRATH!
Buh-bye! X3 X3 X3

;-; THIS IS SERIOUSLY THE BEST THING EVERRRRRRR

-Breaks out in song - DON'T STOP BELIEVIN'! I love this fanfic SO MUCH!

Beautiful ! Lol second comment in a day

I love this story! :)
Constructive Critism: You do an amazing job of showing Eragon and Leolynn's eternal love for each other. Especially on the parts about the promise ring and how devoted they are to each other. Also through the -blush- love-making, though it could be a tiny bit more detailed so it shows their emotions (this applies to the overall story and context) and the poetic side of writing.

I hope you enjoy writing this as much as i do reading it! May your swords stay sharp, and let the stars watch over you.

A book in April?! Please PM me the details, that's so awesome! I've been reading this for (lol I can't remember!) urm... Quite a while. I'm so happy you're continuing :)

Still love it

Keep up the good work

Sorry, that guest review was from me... I didn't realize I wasn't signed in XD fail

I finally bothered to review this fanfic x3 I'm sorry I haven't before, like I always say... I'm lazy. Continuing on... This is amazing! I always imagined Eragon more like *giggles* this. Arya was just too, too... Different from him. They don't click in my eyes.

If you don't mind... I'm interested in the name Leolynn. I wouldn't mind knowing why you chose the name and if it has a certain meaning (IM A GEEK OKAY?!) so if possible, PM me or answer the question before a chapter please? (You don't have to, I'm just interested)

Don't stop writing this, I want to see it through to the end!

:)

I'm reading, and I practically quit the site.

Pretty good, add a bit more variation, I give it 4 and a half stars!

I'm still reading!