Mikey is getting too confy there considering one of the missing childs is his and how come he is going. About the party how did Don managed to get left behind? considering his only child is missing did he lost the coin flip or something.

Enjoy the story so far. Please keep up the good work.

Not to be rude - but I did want to point out that there are a few grammar mistakes within the story and chapter. I just figured I would point it out in case you didn't notice.

Well, anyway, please continue with the good work of this story and I hope to see the next chapter soon. I am intrigued as to what will happen next.

Great plot twist!

Great descriptions. I think you should add something to the description to clear the poligamy thing is not the main focus of the story.

Love this story so far and the twists in the plot keep getting better and better! Please keep up the wonderful work, and I hope to see the next chapter soon!

Nice chapter still in character I guess the Pacha is a OC you havent gone much into how Venus joined them yet at first I assumed it was a next mutation meets 2k3.

Interesting story, too bad most see Venus anywhere and run in the opposite direction. The children characters are interesting and not Mary Sueish. They seem o be getting too well along though.