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NEKO.NEKO.KYUUN 5/16/12 . chapter 12
OH MY GOD THE CUTENESS! please upadate soon :))) i'm looking forward to it!
AllenxEdward 4/15/12 . chapter 12
Cuteness level acheived! Great chapter!
LeFay Strent 4/15/12 . chapter 12
Aw, too cute.

More? Please?
AllenxEdward 4/12/12 . chapter 11
Great chapter! Loved it! I want Edward to get his original body back, but then I don't because I love his awesome wings. It's kind of a lose/lose situation.
Aimiz 4/11/12 . chapter 11
Update a new chapter soon please! Oh and i was wondering, can Ed use his wings to fly?
LeFay Strent 4/11/12 . chapter 11
Aw, cute! XD I loved it when Ed got so excited he almost left in his pj's.
ShinjitsuElricMustang 4/9/12 . chapter 1
Hey, it's equivalent exchange! You review one of my fanfictions, I review one of yours.

I was reading this one a few days ago (During class on my ipod) and I really liked it. Its a bit fast, and the chapters are a bit short. Slow it down and plug on with typing.

BTW Ed really enjoyed reading the review along with Roy.

Hope you enjoy writing the rest of this fan fic, and also reading Hunger.

-Shinjitsu Elric-Mustang, the Winged-Flame Alchemist.
AllenxEdward 4/6/12 . chapter 10
So cute! Love it! I like how you added Ed's short rant! Gotta love the rant!
LeFay Strent 4/6/12 . chapter 10
I literally snorted when Roy asked Ed, "Enjoying the view?" lmao, that was hysterical!

Ah, Ed. Of course he would want to know about a library. You have kept him perfectly in character.
what-is-the-color-of-love 4/6/12 . chapter 10
I was thinkable nh about ed staring at mustangs button and there was this one joke that popped into mind. The awkward moment when you are deep in thought and realize ur staring at someone, was kinda funny. It'd be funnier if it was like ur deep in though and realize ur staring at someones boons or ass
LeFay Strent 4/4/12 . chapter 9
I'm going to take a guess and say that Ed's leg and arm was used as material to make the wings, right? I mean, the bones and stuff couldn't have all come from that little owl.

Good chapter! I look forward to more.
Violet Alchemist 12321 4/4/12 . chapter 9
I absoultely love this! it's epic! :) Can't wait until you post again!
AllenxEdward 4/4/12 . chapter 9
This has to be my favorite chapter so far. I loved it! Poor Edward, but it was cool how he was turned.
XxXsimplyonehellofaloverXxX 4/3/12 . chapter 8
I wish to know more please! This is a very good story
Kersten 4/2/12 . chapter 8
I absoulutely love this fanficton! Thank you for making it!
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