yea! kool! this story rocks!

magus is my favorite chrono trigger character...make him do stuff like shadow doom blaze and stuff!

I could tell who the entity of shadow was all the time. :D well, err, I kinda got thrown off when they thought he was killed, but whatever. _

Really, really good stuff. Did you know this is my favorite stroies list? :) I love that option!

hmm... I'm getting some vague ideas who the Entities are... :P

Great stuff! I'd love to see more!

wow, what a good story! You are really talented! I love the first chapter, and I'm really waiting for the next one... Please, continue writing! Have you got MSN? I wanna contact you.

AHG! WHY DID YOU STOP?

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Its pretty good, a couple of spelling errors, but nothing you can't fix. Make a second chapter very soon... oh yeah, and get some Chrono Tigger characters in there. :P