Okay - before I review this, I would like to note that as I listened to this, the song "You Won't See Me" was playing in the background. Very cool. Lately, my life seems to have an a soundtrack, since I always have my music on Random, and a song always comes in that perfectly fits what I'm doing...
Besides that... I loved the poem. Suboshi is awesome, and it makes me really angry when people say they once felt sorry for him, but hated him after that certain episode. The poor boy has been neglected enough in his life. Whenever I come across a really good Suboshi fanfic, like this one (and NOT like the ones I write *sniffle*), it always makes me want to show it to all those Suboshi-haters and say, "See? He doesn't need any less of a self-esteem!" Shoot - Mom's yelling at me to get offline so I won't be late for my violin lesson. So I just want to say, it was GOOD.

;_; THAT WAS !

*sniff*That wuz beautiful! *sniff*

Onegai, write more!

*sob* Beautiful... there are so few Suboshi fics, and fics like this are what makes me keep coming back to . Thank you for bringing me a smile to my face.

How very sweet! I loved this!

*sniffles* That is such a sad yet sweet poem! I love Suboshi! The twins are my favorite out of the Seiryu Shichi Seishi! *huggles Suboshi plushie* You should write a sequel or something! Excellent writing!

Hmm? Dedicated to Suboshi fans? HEY! THATS ME! O_O! HOW DID YOU KNOW MY THOUGHTS? Anyway. ::Hugs the tv screen:: ;-; Its true. I belong in my world...and he belongs in his...::cries::

hey wow, nice poem thingy, is it a song or did you write it yourself. and it suits suboshi very well. I love suboshi!