GREAT STORY SO PLEASE UPDATE.

OH! Interesting...

Interesting. The game is afoot i beleive is the saying. I will keep my eye out for new postings, maybe monica could turn good in the end, or maybe just become a red smear on a wall. Ilike the first one, but you asked for suggestions.

THIS IS A GREAT STORY.

Grat but its been years update if not frag it

A good story so far. You really should spell Yuri with an "R" though, as I got a bit confused at first. Didn't know the girls HAD last names as the origninal Kei and Yuri were never assigned any by the author. Good touch!
I look forward to how Monica is going to get close to Keigarro with Kei being the protective type that she is. Keep up the banter between Kei and Yuri also, as it is a hallmark of the Dirty Pair.

Kei and Yuri are the Dirty Pair. Kei's goddaughter is Keitaro

This is very intresting,only one problem is that you mis-spelled Yuri, otherwise it is written well so far,Keep up the good work.

FINALLY a DPFlash story, thank god. And YEAH you brought back the pink sniper, I'm psyched to see her back. Good story plot, it's really clever and I like it. A bit too repetitive with De Noir name thing. But I hope you update this soon, it sounds interesting. There's gotta be more DPF fics.

Really good story! Only good DPF story I've read so far. Kei's last is Misaki and Yuri's last name is Hino.

Yes, Kei and Keitaroo

Last names aren't that important to me and formatting may need some work, otherwise the biggest problem is lack of updates, more would be cool we need more dirty pair stories ^^

Please do not put in that stupid giant robot bear in. Mabye have her buy some old weapons like a bretta with bullets, lazer rounds are getting annoying. Just to let you know, They never gave the dirty pair last names. Good Luck

Kai is spelled KEI! As far as last names goes I think its Kei Misaki and Yuri Hono or Hano. It was from another story and I didn't even know their last names. Anyway, story's good just waiting for more. Please Monica! Don't Kell Kaytaro!

Kai is spelled KEI! As far as last names goes I think its Kei Misaki and Yuri Hono or Hano. It was from another story and I didn't even know their last names. Anyway, story's good just waiting for more. Please Monica! Don't Kell Kaytaro!

Hey what are you complaining about, I can't even figure out how to load my stories.

Consider yourself lucky pal

Oh, and by the way excellent story