   orionastro 3/30/12 . chapter 14another great intermission, lets see what chapter 4 will bring. |
| TokoronaSh 3/26/12 . chapter 14 ... Wat. "Adapated from B5 RPG Book"
Uh... how much of this is original? |
| douchiesnacks 3/11/12 . chapter 13 good chapter |
| douchiesnacks 2/26/12 . chapter 12 good chapter |
| douchiesnacks 2/19/12 . chapter 11 good chapter |
| TokoronaSh 2/12/12 . chapter 10 So, while I find it interesting, I think the Intermisisons shouldn't be so infodump. |
| orionastro 2/5/12 . chapter 10 good intermission, when can we expect another chapter , chapter 3? hope soon |
| douchiesnacks 2/5/12 . chapter 10 good chapter |
| orionastro 1/30/12 . chapter 9 another great story is evolving ,very good |
| rdahljr 1/29/12 . chapter 1 Good chapter, I can already predict that the Vulcans are not going to be happy with Earth...oh, well, it's their loss. Keep it coming. |
| madeye harry 1/29/12 . chapter 9 nice angle here. Please update soon. |
| douchiesnacks 1/29/12 . chapter 9 Good chapter |
| orionastro 1/27/12 . chapter 8 great story so far, very good, little by little starfleet is rising ,wich is very good, we should also develop shields and armor to better prrotect our starships. |
| douchiesnacks 1/16/12 . chapter 7 interesting, cant wait for more |
| douchiesnacks 1/16/12 . chapter 5 good chapter |
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