|Reviews for Father and Son|
| Team Major Whitlock 2/12/13 . chapter 2
I loved it, I've been looking for a story like this for a while since nearly all the 'Severus Snape is Harry Potter's father' stories all contain a mean and cruel Severus so I'm glad that I've found this story xx
| Jessalin Holmes NCIS S.A 12/17/12 . chapter 2
awwwww please update!
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 12/15/11 . chapter 2
Oh, god... poor Harry. So how will Harry react to Severus' statement?
| SoulMore 12/13/11 . chapter 2
| Julie Haill 12/8/11 . chapter 2
Wow, Snape as a dad... that's kinda weird and sweet at the same time. And Dumbledore is pretty much a bad guy XD I like it. You seem to have paid close attention to grammar and spelling which is very much appreciated :)
I would like to point out that with those injuries Harry should have been dead, and only counting the broken bones he should not have been able to stand up, let alone walk. You got the point across though, Harry has been badly mistreated (poor thing, no wonder Poppy fainted.) I look forward to you next update.
| Phoenix1592 12/7/11 . chapter 2
hmm the diagnostic showed Harry's real name
whew, that quite a list of abuse, no wonder Poppy fainted and Minerva was hysterical.
Albus is soo in for it.
he's got two witches and one furious wizard out for him,
that's for now, more may be added to list when they find out.
| cara-tanaka 12/7/11 . chapter 2
| Guest 12/7/11 . chapter 1
Wait. Depending on how old Harry was in your story when he was orphaned, WHY are both him and Dudley seemingly smarter than they should be? They should both at least be two or three by now since Severus has only been looking for Harry for one year since the Potters were killed. Shouldn't Harry and Dudley at least still be too young to walk or talk properly? And in Dudley the whales case, too short to open the front door when Severus first arrived at their home if he's only 2-3 years old?
| Nightshade's sydneylover150 11/26/11 . chapter 1
Interesting. I like what you have so far and am interested in reading more. I would suggest that you obtain a beta though, just so you have someone to catch mistakes like inappropriate capitalization and sentence structure that can detract from your story. I look forward to reading more.
| serenity444 11/22/11 . chapter 1
Nice start, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Please update soon!
| SoulMore 11/21/11 . chapter 1
| Phoenix1592 11/20/11 . chapter 1
Glad you found him, Severus
just a tip ...
the spelling "surely" not 'surly'
surly means ill-humored
| cara-tanaka 11/20/11 . chapter 1
Interesting update soon
| biancaruth 11/20/11 . chapter 1
Interesting premise. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.