I loved it, I've been looking for a story like this for a while since nearly all the 'Severus Snape is Harry Potter's father' stories all contain a mean and cruel Severus so I'm glad that I've found this story xx

awwwww please update!

Oh, god... poor Harry. So how will Harry react to Severus' statement?

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Wow, Snape as a dad... that's kinda weird and sweet at the same time. And Dumbledore is pretty much a bad guy XD I like it. You seem to have paid close attention to grammar and spelling which is very much appreciated :)

I would like to point out that with those injuries Harry should have been dead, and only counting the broken bones he should not have been able to stand up, let alone walk. You got the point across though, Harry has been badly mistreated (poor thing, no wonder Poppy fainted.) I look forward to you next update.

hmm the diagnostic showed Harry's real name

whew, that quite a list of abuse, no wonder Poppy fainted and Minerva was hysterical.

Albus is soo in for it.

he's got two witches and one furious wizard out for him,

that's for now, more may be added to list when they find out.

Update soon

Wait. Depending on how old Harry was in your story when he was orphaned, WHY are both him and Dudley seemingly smarter than they should be? They should both at least be two or three by now since Severus has only been looking for Harry for one year since the Potters were killed. Shouldn't Harry and Dudley at least still be too young to walk or talk properly? And in Dudley the whales case, too short to open the front door when Severus first arrived at their home if he's only 2-3 years old?

Interesting. I like what you have so far and am interested in reading more. I would suggest that you obtain a beta though, just so you have someone to catch mistakes like inappropriate capitalization and sentence structure that can detract from your story. I look forward to reading more.

Nice start, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Please update soon!

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Glad you found him, Severus

just a tip ...

the spelling "surely" not 'surly'

surly means ill-humored

Interesting update soon

Interesting premise. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.