Nice end. Well done for this original story

Very interesting concept...

Great story.

Wonderful, emotional story. I had tears in my eyes all the way through. Thank you.

that was an interesting concept, I do feel bad for the alternate Daniel teal.c and cam now though losing their jack

Very nice. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

sweet ending. i loved it!

Such a sweet ending. This was such a short story but I loved it. :D

Lovely. Thanks.

Is there more? I love this story! Thanks for an amazing read! XD

Crystal

wonderful chapter!

Wonderful.

Who knew Daniel could be such a cruel jerk! Great chapter, but very sad.

Wow I love it it's an interesting plot and you develop it well. Can't wait to read what happens NeXT

Awww. This is breaking my heart! But also not, because they found each other again. :) I'm mad at Sam and Jack's teammates for not wanting them to do this, even though I really do see their valid POVs on the matter. Looking forward to the next chapter. :D

What a great story idea! Loving it so far, can't wait to see where it goes.