This story, or at least this two chapters, are very good.

I guess chances of you seeing this review are scarce, but I'll say it anyway, I hope you'll continue and finish this excellent fanfic someday, since I feel there's at least two more chapters to it before it has a proper ending.

Anyway, I just wanted to say that. And that if you don't want to write enymore, perhaps you could allow me to try to finish it?

Great story , I can't find many mummys alive storys .

Still I would fret about the bandages. Skin condition or not, it's weird.

I'm just ranting again. TO the REVIEW! Okay, good chappy yo. I wonder what Ja-Kal's hair looks like...

Your story is going along nicely, not that many punctation errors. Keep at it, and don't take too long to update.

Dude yo! I didn't even know that Fan fiction had any Mummies Alive stories. Cool, I'm glad that this one was my first. It's a neat point of view. I always thought that Ja-Kal would just be a loner. He had a wife and son that he had to leave behind, and that always kept me from thinking that he and Nefer-Tina would be together.

Still I like it, the only thing that troubles me is the fact Ja-Kal has bandages on his face, and I don't know about Amanda but I would tend to think about that. Plus he wears a toque, or atleast I think he does. I haven't seen the show in so long I can't remember.

Anyway I'm ranting, so I'll end this review. Keep writing young grasshopper, you'll go far.

This is really cool. I hope you update it soon.

This story could really go interesting places. YOu may also want to consider extending it further into the future. Maybe at a time when Presly can deal with the fact that Ja-Kal and is mother are an item.

only one thing i can say...
aw
how "Kawai"
please make more soon!

aahh that was so sweet first friends then well lovers!
nice story hope to see the coming chapters soon

Cool Beans. Love this story. Very unique

Well so you answered my request with in the matter of minutes. ^_^ I guess i should look before i ask. Either way you now have to write about their date^_^ I just can't wait for that one! You're a good writter and the two stories of yours that i've read I've enjoyed! Keep it up!

Check ya later Catz!!

Sweet use of literary devices. You definately have talent!!

keep up the good work! i know the next chapter will be very interesting.

I hope you write more soon. It's turning out to be a great story.

I enjoyed this story a lot, you have avery nice writing style. I haven't seen the movie Mummies Alive! in *ages*... I might have to rent it again, :)

That was your first attempt at a fanfic?! Fantastic job! Yes. I followed the link back from one of your other fics to check out your other stuff. that should tell you what I think of your writing ability!

Keep up the great work!