Your story is so beautiful *cries*. I think you captured the emotions of all three girls perfectly. This is so touching, and sweet, and you know, this is exactly what I thought was going on in the girls' minds when they met Tidus. You're a great writer...capturing all the characters' feelings so vividly. Oh, and, I appreciate how you dedicated this fic "for all those who loved and have not been loved in return"-trust me, I know that feeling:(

*sniffs* I haven't cried from reading a fic for a very long time. I don't know if it's because of how well you wrote or if I was just depressed and in the mood for this, but good job, anyway. I would have read this before, but I hadn't played the game back then. _;

God, this makes me want to play FFX all over again. But I'm not going to. I need to finish FFX-2, first! I have to find out if Tidus really is still alive...somehow...

Very good.

C-chan

I really like these chapters and I hope you can write in another person's perspective...maybe Wakka or Auron? I think these thoughts are very realistic and you portrayed them well. Hope you update!

Damn, that was good! You should go into poetry or somethin'! o.O;

I like your idea about making them think when they first met Tidus. Where are you in FFX? I'm getting an e-mail address soon, and I'll review the name. I beat FFX, but I was stuck on Evrae thw Wyrm for like six weeks. Chlorophyll,

Qui-ti

*sniff* god that was so beautiful. :'( great story! :)

sniff... sniff... Amen.

Amen. That's what always say. But that doesn't mean I don't mean it. I never say anything I don't mean when I'm saying it.

So beautiful... really, just gorgeous. Hmmm... I seem to have an idea... Illreadtherestlaterpromiskay?

I already tried to reviev, but the technik didn't let me... Arg! Now again: I love reading this and I think you did Rikku really well. I hope you continue soon, 'm already addicted.

; Oops.

Okay, I guess that one was my fault. I did the same thing that I got pissed over with the reviewers of a one-shot of my own: assumed a pairing that wasn't actually there. I apologize. *Bow, grovel*

And as for constructive criticism, you hardly need it! It was just a couple slip-ups. 3 You're a wonderful writer.

I agree that Rikku seems to have had a thing for Tidus, and maybe Tidus had a thing for her, but Yunie was just wham-bam-lookit-me-you're-mine! or something. What I meant to say is that the moment he saw her, he was hooked. Yeah. It's six AM. I need sleeeeeep. Sorry.

Your interpretation of the relationship between Tidus/Yuna is also good...it makes sense. I guess I've just been influenced by my own fanfiction. Oo;; Oddness.

Anyhoots, great job on this one! And no, I won't call it a Rikku/Tidus :D I don't particularly like that pairing either, but you make it believable, so I'm happy. (Hell, the only pairing I'm truly happy with is really Tidus/Yuna...and maybe Jecht/Tidus' mom. Hooray for underdeveloped characters!)

Did you know that there's a picture of the boy they based Tidus off of in the FFX OST? It's in the little pamphlet that comes with it. He's *incredible.* *_* Absolutely divine...so beautiful. Though the hair and skin are differently shaded, of course. I think the likeness can most be seen in the beginning of the Macalania FMV, (maybe) the beginning of the game and in one other FMV, though I could be wrong. (Ah! Those eyes! *Faints dead away*)

Yeah. I'm gonna go get ready for schooool now. (Ew. I think there's a test today. And I have practice from 6-8, meaning I don't get home until almost 9 PM. Argh!)

Anyway, great job. (More, more!) :D

Shad

..that was beautiful... truly i thought they felt those feelings..but you..made them so much more

never stop

well done, you have managed to portray these 2 characters perfectly. I will look forward to any further chapters.

This is a good story! You could have Rikku spying on them at the Pond for her outlook on it. :D

This is wonderful. You've captured the inner struggle within Lulu perfectly.