I like it.

I can't...this was so beautiful and tragic. Utterly amazing.

Feels. I have been overcome by feels. This was so good! It's beautiful and I really can't even think because FEELS. Anyway, awesome job!

aw heck that was beautiful. i really really like this: "you drive. trying to outrun the rising sun." more so, the second person pov was just perfect for Alaska's last moments so good job. really really good job.

Oxygen thief... that's, umm, yup. Exactly how it feels.

That is fantastic. Just wow. The second person is a different way of writing, and it works so well. This is exactly what I can imagine Alaska thinking, to the T. You've kept her character brilliantly. Thank you for writing something so great!

This was insane and amazing and... jees. This is Alaska all over. You're amazing, it's perfect. And I don't throw that word around.

wow, you captured Alaska's character like perfectly. just.. wow. xoxo

AWESOME

i quite like this . . . maybe you used the word 'fuck up' a little too much though.

Oh wow I don't think I've ever read a fanfiction that was so accurate about a charecter. This was freaking brilliant!

That was amazing, I was tearing up.

I thought this line was great:

Their names hang in the air like smoke, as thick and unpleasant as your first cigarette.

And this one too!

The tears make it hard to see. The alcohol makes it hard to see. The rage and hatred and fury and the boiling in your chest make it hard to see.

A great piece of writing - well done!

I like this story. It fits with what I'd imagine that scene to be, and the second person writing works well.

Amazing. Just spectacular. DFTBA