 Blume 5/3/12 . chapter 1*gasp*
yes you are1 it IS Rurouni Kenshin fics again! XD which make sme very happy! but I think you've changed a little, since at least for now you've set the story at the end of his killing days, unlike before, and I find that funny, being you're reintroducction to Kenshin adn all that !;
anyway! I really liked it! I've always been fascinated by Katsura's quiet ways! |
 omasuoniwabanshi 11/28/11 . chapter 1Bravo! Nice work setting up the background for the episode where Yamagata offers Kenshin a job. You really captured his attitude and motives. Nicely done. |
 Jellybean06 11/27/11 . chapter 1Yay! It made me happy to see this from you.
I love how you capture these little moments. And how natural the characters seem.
Thank you for sharing! |
 amie689 11/24/11 . chapter 1You haven't lost your touch, dear..
It's like you haven't stopped writing RK fanfiction :) |
 The Wandering Pen 11/23/11 . chapter 1Another excellent tale, Sirius! I love the way you write Katsura-san. So cool, thoughtful, and insightful about his hitokiri. And how that peeves Yamagata-san. There are so many nice bits of phrasing in here that if I attempted to mention each one, I'd just be re-writing this. Thanks for finding it and posting it. I've missed stories from you (since RK is about the only thing I read here). I'm looking forward to any updates on the existing tales, too. Bring it on! :) |
 skenshingumi 11/22/11 . chapter 1Very happy to see you writing ruroken again. I found this exchange between Katsura and Yamagata very plausible. I especially liked the astuteness of the observation that Katsura was their last tie to Kenshin. I hope you keep writing. |
 Moonprincess202 11/22/11 . chapter 1This was really cool. I can't remember having read anything from Yamagata Aritomo's perspective before. It's quite interesting to see his view of Battousai. |
 ChocoBerry 11/22/11 . chapter 1This was such a great read! I have such a soft spot for Katsura; I feel like he is a severely overlooked and under appreciated character.
Thanks so much for writing this! :D |
 kureiookami 11/22/11 . chapter 1I am so so very happy to see one of your Kenshin fic again...
I just love to read you.
This one sounds interesting, because it seems to be set at the beginning of the serie. I can't wait to see what you do with it. And of course to read any update to your other Kenshin fics.
Thank you |
 TrisakAminawn 11/22/11 . chapter 1Heh. Cool.
I have a Yamagata fic somewhere where he's dying at the absurdly advanced age at which he actually did so, and Kenshin's there. Also very very old. And there are tensions because the conscript army was Yamagata's baby and got Kaoru's father killed before the series even starts, and I wouldn't be surprised if Kenji or his children or one of Yahiko's children had been drafted and killed overseas by the thirties. It's much weirder than this.
/Nice/ dialogue. Katsura's characterization was good. And the moment of horror from Yamagata at the thought that Kenshin might be so far gone he needed exterminating. And a little exchange on the nature of trust. Very nice.
Also the dryness about the killing spree details. This, that, he'd grown by three feet... |
 Conspirator 11/22/11 . chapter 1Absolutely worth the wait! In fact, anything by you is worth the wait. Welcome back, you have been sorely missed! |
 LadyRhiyana 11/22/11 . chapter 1Thank you for fine-tuning and posting this :) I love Katsura fics and this is one of the better ones. Yamagata's view of Katsura and his private agendas and dealings with Kenshin are particularly fascinating. Katsura's throwaway comment: "He's already dealt with another 'liability' of mine." was brilliant. |
 J Luc Pitard 11/22/11 . chapter 1Love this oblique look at Kenshin. One thing I love about the series is how the people from his past react to him 10 years on. He's still just as idealistic (though a bit messed up), while they've moved on, "grown up" and settled into the new realities of life.
This short work is very nice in the way the character looking for Kenshin remains skeptical until Katsura shows him the swords with such obvious regret. His growing realization feels more natural for his stubborn refusal to accept Katsura's word up till then. |
 Stefni 11/21/11 . chapter 1I'm so glad to see you writing another Kenshin story. |
 ZukoFlame 11/21/11 . chapter 1Very interesting! You explored a character that often goes unnoticed in the RK fandom. I also really liked the part where Yamagata tells Katsura that if he asked Kenshin to come back, that he would. I'd never even considered that...it's interesting to think about the extent of Kenshin's loyalty...anyways, thanks for the fic! I can't wait to see more of your RK stuff!
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