Groovy. Ahem. Very well written; and you are right - I do prefer this story to the other as I find the divergent more entertaining.

BTW I just uploaded two new additions to Shadows of Things to Come. Enjoy!

I shall be watching this space...

May the Force be with you. Darkly, deeply and disturbingly mwuahahahahahaha...

I love Me More! Now! (Please?)

That's a real good story and the idea is fantastic. That's a much nicer version of the Obi-Wan Master.

Senice I have been delagated to the mass of Fan's of your work. I WANT MORE!

Thanks Galatyn

Alonzo Soban

Kith'sa of the Soban

I love it.

I love the concept of Obi-Wan with a female padawan. Nothing improper tho, what a relief. Still she has to cope with other females swooning over her master-great! Please update, I really enjoyed it so far and want more!

this is me when i found your story: :-)

this is me as i read your story: :-)

this is me if you dont update: :-(

i think you understand what im getting at here...

hey cool story i cant wait to see what happens next.I dont like Mace Windu so maybe if a jedi has to die MAKE IT HIM lol great stork so farDIE MACE DIE!

*looks pointedly at Galatyn* Are you EVER going to update this? C'mon, I neeeeed my fic fix ;-)

i'm glad i read this fic...your characters speak distinctly and their personalities are vivid through their dialogue. i think you captured obi-wan's voice particularly well and erena came alive through her speech. are you planning on continuing this? i think it's worthy of being finished...just my thoughts though :)

faye

Hey this is excellent! update soon plz!

Excellent. I really like it !

interesting. i like. _

Great story! I love stories in which Qui-Gon survived the battle on Naboo. I'm eager to learn what happens next now that Erena's and Obi-Wan's paths have merged. Please write more! (please oh, please!)

Write more! Write more! no i don't think she's Mary Sue-ish at all, well not in a bad way at least :-) *slaps forehead* i can't believe i'm reading a Star Wars fic! I'm a newsie girl. But it's good, so I demand that you write more! lol ;-)