OMG THE FEELS. THE FEELS. couldn't help it. Had to read the end first xD alright I'm gonna read from the start start again. FOR REALS. and I'm gonna love it even more CUZ I know what gonna happen ! CX yeah REVIEW 100 FTW!

OMG IM GONNA SLAM DOWN THESE TWO REVUEWS AND FREAKING REREAD THIS ENTIRE STPRY BECASUE IT IS ONE OF MY FAVOURITE DAMN STORIES AND I NEED SOME FEELS.

It's 3:23 in the morning. I'm tired. YET FANFICTION IS KEEPING ME UP AS USUAL. and I REREAD this because I was reading callous and so I randomly decided to read this again. AND IM JUST BAWLING MY EYES OUT RIGHT NOW. I ACTUALLY CAN'T STOP CRYING.

DAMN HORMONES.

My goodness gracious, it's perfect.
It's so sweet and fluffy and happy, and then BAM! If I hadn't read the rest of the story, if I didn't know what happened before I even began to read it, I probably would have stared at the screen for ten minutes being shocked. And then I would get really depressed. Even knowing what was going to happen, I'm still depressed! Which means that it's awesome. :D This is great!

THIS IS SO FLUFFY! :O You are really good at fluffy, by the way. And tragedies. It was also very tragic.
But about the story itself-
I appreciate that you're giving us insight on the past of everyone. Graciela only kind of lived through Briar's memories, so it's nice to see (read?) her as a fully fleshed-out character. And Cilan's backstory is cool, too, I guess.
Yes, I use big words and any language. Blame the world.
-Ishi Bana-Bana

Awwww... Poor Cilan...

so sad, so very very sad...

I am so sorry your cats r phschopaths

pokedexES -that's how you do it! :D

You finished it... you finally finished it...
[Is probably like a month late. :D]
This, my friend, is a momentous occasion...
How do you think I should celebrate?
[Runs off to start the sequel]
This was such a great story. Thank you so much for writing it!

[Insert Ghetsis's crazy smile]
I. KNEW. IT.
Well. Some of it. I loved the twists. I must be some kind of horrible, but it was awesome. And I loved how she talked about Gracie with total stony power and then finally let herself cry... It was perfect.
On to the epilogue! :D

I didn't realize I wasn't logged in when I wrote that review until just now. Oops.

An awesome ending for an awesome story. Thanks for writting it, I'm glad I found it. I can't find good fanfics often but yours are awesome.

So sad it's over... but at least there's going to be a sequel. :)

Will Briar be going to make an appearance in there? I can only imagine the interaction between the protagonists.

Anyways sorry for not reviewing the many previous chapters, but I have been reading them though. They were all pretty good (and epic when Sage came out of nowhere to beat Ghetis? up ;) )

Keep up the great writing! Can't wait to read the sequel.

no problem it was fun, i like were i live even thought we dont have the coolest animals, but we do have two really cool one's first and the oldest still living here the tuatara, this cute little green dionsaur lizard. hehe we have a dino! :) and second what we the kiwi's are named after, the Kiwi a cute little brown soft feathered flightless bird with a long pointy beck! they so cute!.

look them up they cute.

ill watch for anymore storys and maybe i can tell you more.

BYE! :)

P.S i liked the chapter :)