plz update! great fic hun! aww! jo!

Awww, poor Jo. Poor Dean. Poor me... Because this was just heartbreaking to read.

Jo's pleas for them to kill her were so incredibly sad, but when she asked him not to do it wearing 'his' face... Oh, that was just too much, lol. *sniffles*

I can't WAIT to see what happens next, and yes, that means I'll be bugging you to finish this.

LOVED this chapter!

Yay, Jo!

But, before I get too excited about her appearance, I have to say that the lines about Bobby having a woman over at his house made me LMAO.

Can't wait to read more, doody. You are awesome, as is this fic. :)

Saren Kol is a very lucky FAGE recipient!

It's been awhile since I've reviewed but I just saw this new story the other day and feel in love with it! So interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next! Great writing as always!(: can't wait to read more!

Missy

Now what did I say about the brothers going through the portal? Argh! It WOULD be Sam that got enthralled by the damn thing, wouldn't it? Now where did they end up? What danger is on the other side wreaking havoc with people?

Can't wait to find out!

Wow, that sounds like a really strange case. People disappearing, then reappearing, with things that were bad becoming fixed, or vice versa. Weird portal. I hope Sam and Dean don't get sucked through, cause that would just suck!

Onwards to see what happens next...

Pardon me for a minute while I sit here stunned.

I really hate the widow. Good lord what a piece of work! With the glass of liquor and the hitting on Sam...

Dean being hesitant while Sam is all gung-ho is something you don't see terribly often. And, like here, it usually breeds nothing but trouble. The details of getting lost in the dark - the field with its scarecrow, bickering over GPS, Dean driving slowly, the deer - were eerie and spine tingling.

I really thought this particular part at the end was very telling and truthful about their relationship: "Before Dean had managed to reach the portal, Sam disappeared- a yell of surprise the only sound left echoing after his departure. Without a moment of hesitation, Dean did the only thing he could of think- and followed his brother, blindly into danger." - this reminded me of the series, that unwavering, brotherly devotion where Dean gives everything - even his own life - to protect his brother.

As always, you have me on the edge of my seat. Looking forward to more and VERY curious to see where this goes!

Oh my. What a great start!

Can't wait to read more.

Why is Sam always the one getting into trouble? LOL Gotta love him for it though. Great chapter hun! I hope you feel better soon.

Totally loving it already! Of course you totally put my story to shame. (lowers head and begins to chant "I'm not worthy").

;-D

This may be your most interesting case yet. Regenerating body parts? Sudden appearance of stage 3 cancer and radiation treatment? And, if I can quote Dean, "You had me at glass eye."

A very promising romp. Looking forward to more!

So clearly Sam missed the memo about not throwing himself into any open holes/portals that might be laying around.

I'm anxious to see what's on the other side though, and that was the perfect cliff-hanger to ensure that we're all firmly on the edge of our seats.

I love the conversation between the boys, which is totally in character, as always.

Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

(Obviously there's no need to wax lyrical about your amazing writing, because we all already know you are incredibly and ridiculously talented. So I'll just leave that there :)

plz update! great story hun!