| Reviews for Spinebreaker |
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colrey 3/11/12 . chapter 1Wow, O don't think I understand this... |
AliBelly 2/18/12 . chapter 1Holy fuck this story freaked me out. It was good, but freaky |
amberkey 2/12/12 . chapter 1Wow! I don't usually read oneshots but I have to say that this was amazing. |
Dance or die 2/8/12 . chapter 1Crazy Shit man... I love the way your mind works... |
parkesy23 2/6/12 . chapter 1wow, what a oneshot. very well written and different. thanks it was certainley a twist in characters. loved it thanks |
lalalizzie 1/19/12 . chapter 1what the fuck just happened? is this supposed to be crackfic? idk who wrote the last bit with the body snatching (?) and the baby with a tail but it makes no sense at all. |
Twink423 1/13/12 . chapter 1That was definitely some crazy effed up shiznit, but it was a good mystery and scary. So good job on writing something scary and I had no idea what would happen next. |
csp4 1/8/12 . chapter 1"Empty bathroom, smelling of vomit and piss. Nice tiles though." LOL LOL I'm prepared for something to jump out at Charlie & I read this::)) Charlie's not very observant if the baby's far enough along to kick & he hasn't even noticed Bella's pregnant:( "Jacob rose, hastily making to cross over to the taller boy that he loved" Wow! Totally caught me by surprise with that one::)) LOL LOL That was one of the best 'Twilight' horror stories I've read to date! Great entertainment::)) Thanks for sharing! |
fcat5761 12/27/11 . chapter 1Awesome! I was so ready to believe that Jacob was out for some twisted revenge, though not because he'd been brainwashed into loving Edward. What happened to the real Edward? Was he taken over also? |
Delandora 12/26/11 . chapter 1That was quite disturbing, and wonderfully spooky. This was written so well, it was hard to believe more than one person had written it. You all did such an amazing job with this, really. I didn't suspect Edward until the very end when it was spelled out. Great job, everyone. I enjoyed reading this! |
amikins 12/23/11 . chapter 1creepy! |
MsEm 12/17/11 . chapter 1LOVED IT! took me a sec to realize Edward really was a victim too.. |
DarkAngel2Wolf 12/14/11 . chapter 1Holy crap the ending! That was all kinds of messed up! Maybe not a story one should read before bed.. Wow. First time I've read a story with Edward as the really really really bad bad guy, haha! Wow I'd have never seen that ending coming.. Well written! I don't usually like horror but this was enjoyable. I couldn't pull away once the bodies piled up. |
EdwardsBrunette2 12/13/11 . chapter 1Creepy... |
TwiSagaLoverxx 12/11/11 . chapter 1Holy Shit! You should write horror more often! That seriously just blew my mind. Like, completely shattered it! Absolutley amazing! xx |