Toroise.

Meat pie.

Oh my gosh, I LOVED that !

Loved the Humor/Angst. Great little story ! Loved the idea that Snape and Filch have more in common than their loathing of/desire to torture students.

Thanks for a great read.

Wow! I loved that. I haven't read any fanfiction like that before. It looks like it would be a lot of fun to write.

An experiment in minimalism that works extraordinarily well. There is great emotion even without all the usual descriptives a more complex work would have. I am impressed.

I liked this one very much. Especially Divination. Heh. The bit where he's "talking" to Filch was a little unclear though. Were all of Severus' words thoughts only? Filch responded to some of them as though he'd spoken. Still, I liked it.

WOW! That was AMAZING! I almost cried! Such insight into Snape's character... I'm very glad you wrote this.

The tortoise-meat pie part got me interested. Nice. :) I'm not good at reviewing...

This is... awsome!

Wonderful done.

The style is great, it took me a while to get into it but after that it was simply wonderful.

Great.

Poor Snape, poor Filch. Well... maybe not... maybe not poor. Because they both understand...?

Strange.

I loved it :)

Best wishes,

Ensis

Whoa. Interesting writing style. Very creative! And now I'm reviewing in short stream-of-consciousness sentence fragments, too *rolls eyes at self.* OK, this was pretty cool, though. So do MWPP just pick on Snape for no reason, then? How mean! I especially enjoyed the bits about all Snape's classes at the beginning. You drew out just about as long as possible the "tortoise-meatpie? What the heck is she talking about?" confusion without making it so long I lost interest. Good job!

That was awesome-a look at another side of Snape.

And I like what you did with Filch.

Excellent.

Perfect Gryffindors. Golden Gryffindors. The ones that everyone loves. The ones that can torment those who are lonely or darker... and never realize that they're slowly destroying other people. *sniff* Look at me, I'm bawling and it was a short fic! Imagine what you would do to me if you wrote a long one? *grins*

Love your works; keep writing!

Wow. This is lovely, and very well done. Maximum emotion conveyed with few exquisite perfectly chosen words!

You made my heart break for Severus, and I really loved the look at Argus protecting a very young Snape.

Oh, that's so wonderful! I absolutely adore it!Another great job!

Yay! Really rather clever

Cool style! Let me know if you write more in the same style.

That was great. It was amusing at points, but sad at others and I think you captured it well. I just love the relationship between Filch and Severus. Consider your experiment a sucess:) Cheers.