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Beloved Daughter 12/11/11 . chapter 1
This is a really cool idea. And you're right. I've never seen this done before. Great story. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. I only wish that you would extend the story, make it longer. See Kuei's reaction to Toph...
ArrayePL 11/27/11 . chapter 1
Interesting idea. I wonder if Toph would really be the right bride as Lonf Feng thinks or if she would change Kuei. Thanks for sharing.
munchydino12 11/23/11 . chapter 1
Nice, love your writing style.
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