This is a really cool idea. And you're right. I've never seen this done before. Great story. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. I only wish that you would extend the story, make it longer. See Kuei's reaction to Toph...

Interesting idea. I wonder if Toph would really be the right bride as Lonf Feng thinks or if she would change Kuei. Thanks for sharing.

Nice, love your writing style.