MOARRR

Great story so far, I think your characterizations are pretty spot on and I like how focused your writing is. You also have a knack for describing the fight scenes in a way that really gives on the feel of what it would be like to actually be in the cockpit of a Valkyrie fighting for your life.

I'm also a little confused about Alto and Sheryl's relationship, but I'm interested to see where it goes.

Looking forward to reading more chapters, please keep updating. It would be a shame for such a promising fic to be abandoned. It happens all too often.

Excellent chapter! I also wonder what it is that Rachel has against Sheryl? Time will tell I suppose.
I wonder how much Sheryl can take before she snaps?

Also looking forward to more awkward Zentradi moments in the future. :)

nice chapter and i really hope u continue this story but can u tell me where are u taking this story and will there be bit of romance in it?

Oh no! No updates in 4 1/2 months? Please don't let this die!

Seriously, there's not enough Macross love on this site and you can't let this excellent story die!

wow just finished the pt 1 of the 4th chap. And it's amazing love all the details, and the friendship triangle it is so so great. Keep writing and hoping Sheryl can improve her skills lol.

Its a nice story you should continue with it. And i wanted to ask you will the main pairing remain altoxsheryl ? Please keep it like that only because they cover each other greatly

Nice chapter

Nice chapter. I guess first kills really are tough huh. And good job with that altoxsheryl scene. I wish there were some happy scenes

Nice chapter

Nice chapter. You did a great job in creating the antagonists in this.

Nice chapter. I hope you dont break those two up.

Nice chapter

Nice plot

This is very well written. I don't think a Macross Idol has ever ended up piloting seriously before.

And you're keeping everyone friends, and avoiding making the losing love rival out to be a bad sport. Well done.

I look forward to seeing more.