I really like this story...its like all the characters just jumped out of the series and onto paper-or the computer screen as it were. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I LOVE THIS STORY! I didn't like the concept of Cye being a father, but it's interesting to read stories that don't fit your personal. I REALLY want to know what happens. What becomes of mia and Sage's relationship? Where are the other warriors? What about Mojiro? Where is he? Do Cye and Sekhmet become gay lovers? TELL ME MORE?

AWSOME! This story is amazing! I can't wait to see what happened to the ones that went missing. By the way, Sage and Mia? SAGE AND MIA? I loved the mental yelling fit Cye had with himself, because I was doing the same thing at exactly the same moment! Anyway, I'm guessing this is probably the last chapter, so I'm going to go read the sequel. Expect more reviews soon!

That's the best chpapter yet, at least in my opinion. The argument(s) in the car were priceless. Yes, Sekhment, Cye is an idiot. Doing the attack RIGHT THERE was effective though. Idiotic, but effective. Poor Kojiro must be wondering why Cye left him hanging on the phone. Oh well. Crisis overrules all. Great chapter!

This'll be interesting. Good chapter. The picture that Ariel drew was pretty funny. Sekhment restraining himself was a sight to behold too. By the way...where is Kojiro? He's probably moved out by now...Anyway, good job!

Oh great. Sehkment found him? This isn't going to be pretty...What'll Kojiro say? He never met the warlords, did he? Anyway, so Ariel has grown quite a bit now, hasn't she? This will be exciting. Good job with teh chapter. I laughed at the hippie Dais and idiotic Cale. Good job at portraying all the characters too!

Kojiro sleeptalks. That made me laugh. I swear, he's probably one of the best friends that someone could possibly even HOPE of having. I'm really beginning to like him. I wonder what all of the Ronin Warriors (aside from Cye) are thinking right now...I thought the entire thing with Sage being a girl magnet was funny too, by the way. Good job!

Nice chapter. They must have hit a pretty big nerve with Mr. Miyamoto (I don't think I spelled that rigth) in order for him to suddenly change his mind. I'm not sure I want to know what that orphanage is like...Anyway, good job!

Hey there! This was a good chapter. The call with Kento was pretty well-written. The responses seemed completely natural and everything. You've done a great job!

That was a good chapter- thought i'm not sure how to describe it. The end was sweet- from where he got on the train. You're good at incorperating real-life problems into stories! Good work!

Crud.

Good chapter. I must read more, like now. This story is really addicting! It's nicely written too.

Awsome chapter. Everyone should have a friend like Kojiro, geez...that guy is amazing. I'm interested to see what's coming next too...Great chapter!

EEP. That was CRUEL. Good chapter. You've got a knack for writing details...I won't forget this for awhile. I could actually see what was happening, which is always good for a writer. Anyway, good story so far!

Yet another well-written chapter. I'm rather enjoying this story. I'm also liking Kojiro more and more, and at first, I wasn't too sure about him. I still have a bad feeling about

Sheila though. Anyway, I liked the entire scene with Rowen helping Cye and Kento and Ryo spying (sort of anyway). Good Job!

Nicely written! I can picture all of the characters you described. I can already guess that Sheila is going to be trouble...Hopefully, I'm wrong. All of the reactions the boys had were hilarious, by the way, especially Cye arguing with himself about his name. Now, I shall read on! Good job!