is going to be a good story!

you could have at least given credit to teamfourstar for using their fight scene from dragon ball z abridged. by the way, why didn't ryan DOOOOOOODGE!

10 would be a good chance to add more weapons to Ashers inventory. His dads hidden blade or knife perhaps

Told some of my friends about this and we checked it in class (teacher was not happy with us after) they liked it. They wont make accounts cuz they claim they have more importent things to do and, lets face it, most people in todays scociety dont read anymore. Its sad really, reading is fun writing though is even better :D

Again sweet. Im probbably gonna start reveiwing via PM

Another awesome chapter! You seem to have Ashers personallity down, I like how you made a refrence to Fang. I love how you made him relaxing as the shadow things do all the work. Again, nice job. Update soon.

Nice chapter dude. I wont be able to send messages for awhile, my sister screwd up my computer so im stuck useing my DS. I think it was a good idea to have Asher leave before Kitty showed up since it woulda caused some issues probbably and I liked how you made him have a better part than just teen mercenary by having him control the shadow things . My sis said you should make Asher get yelled at by Kitty for helping the bad guys to add abit of comedy or some other interaction(she cant make her name since she wrecked my computer now my bro and other sis will flip on her LOL) I'll pm you when I can use the computer again. Peace out man Update soon

Im not sure if my last comment posted since I used my DSi so i'll again. Awesome Chapter, cant wait for more. I yelled to my friend 'Oh my god he added Asher in! Sweet!', cant wait to see how you make Kitty interact with him if her and Dudley were the TUFF agents that showed up. reminder Kitty is Asher's mother so keep that in mind, try not to change that since its importent to his character (Just to refresh, Asher is protective of his mother and sister so it would out of character if he didnt flip out on his employer or the others for attacking her0.) I'll try to keep in mind its your story, and try not get pissed if you ignore all that, key word is TRY not will. Lastly, im wondering if you want to team up and make a TUFF puppy fic with me (if this sounds weird sorry, just got the idea from my cousin) Message me if you want to

Awesome so far. One question, could you find a way to add OCs you recived (the two I sent you for example, hint hint) If I read this right the hooded guy has big plans for Petropolis and in my head I thought it'd be cool if he hired my character, Asher, to do some of his dirty work. I hope you take this into consideration.

pretty cool, continue on Vox.