   Loren 12/22/00 . chapter 1Guy's ass! Guy's ass! |
| Lightning Fury Strike 11/30/00 . chapter 1 not bad |
| Alan Smithee 9/18/00 . chapter 1 Dude. I totally blew on this one. Not what I'd expect from me. Ah, well, if anyone asks, I'll just say that it's bad because "Rinoa'd write bad poetry."
(No one must know I'm down with Rinoa...) |
| The evil tee hee girl 9/18/00 . chapter 1 cool! but whats with the i can here you talking in your sleep? |
| naRfz 9/18/00 . chapter 1 no comprende..but good try lol SHE WAS LOOKING AT THIS d00d'S ASS! HAHAHAHA. anyhow, i give u credit for trying..i mean HEY! look at my retarded stories... |
| Reinhold Messner 9/17/00 . chapter 1 Dood, next time do an ORIGINAL one and don't just try and make it fit the words. (P.S. Do you even think Rinoa would have even heard "Closing Time", much less the much more obscure "Singing In My Sleep"?) |
| Me 9/17/00 . chapter 1 confusing, much. |
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