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Venus914 12/5/11 . chapter 1
I love angst. I love a good cry and you did a wonderful job. ) But i guess, personally, i wasnt 'touched' or affected with this story because of the main character. I hate Ron Weasley. So, even if you would pain him as someone worthy of forgiveness, i wouldnt be able to. I hate him that much. Instead of pitying him, you made me hate him more in this fic of yours. ) I don't know. I dont' like Hermione sometimes and Im annoyed at Harry sometimes. They're definitely not my favorite character in HP. But i dislike Ron Weasley in every fiction, even in canon. I dont like the way he treats Harry. So, no matter if he's raped or whatever, it still wouldn't move me. )
WickedPineapple 4/30/11 . chapter 1
After the reading the reviews..and with them writing everything that probably needs to be said...

The only thing I could add to their raving remarks is..Wow and..Why the hell are there so little reviews?

PS Please dont stop writing. EVER. I mean it in a such a way as even when you die pass this hopefully gene trademark to your kids so future readers can read your work.. or SOMETHING!
barbarataku 6/15/05 . chapter 1
What a totally different point of view. Wow! Ron's betrayal is something to think about.
Incarnadine 5/24/05 . chapter 1
Amazing, and hard hitting. Far more real than it would be had you put more detail in. I love the way Ron realises that he is just as bad as his "rat" now. Wow. Ron as Judas. I've seen it before, of course, but never this good. You're great.

Oh, and do you know that the Dark Mark is present on the left forearm? Since you said it was the right. Still, a minor technical detail. :)
Samantha 2/18/04 . chapter 1
*mouth agape* I just... I don't even know what to say. I hate, HATE first person dialogue fics, but this was wonderful. It was well written with a good plot and just... wonderful. Forgive my inability to express myself better at the moment, but I really don't know what to say. I guess just that I liked it, and you're very good.
Silver Moon Angel 11/9/02 . chapter 1
Heart breaking and genious. I do wish you would have cleared up who was who earlier though, it was bloody discombobulating! Other than that, this is an awesome story.
Green Marker 7/23/02 . chapter 1
It's abolutely...eye-opening...and, I have to say I love ther SS/HP pairing mentioning...but, it's just so sad and suprising that *Percy*, of all people, went to the Dark Side. Ron is somewhat of an understanding. Anyway, I shall be back later for your other story to R&R. Bye.

Sara
dontgiveahoot 5/4/02 . chapter 1
...Wow. That was fierce, dramatic, emotional and gripping. I loved how Ron's mental armour was slowly broken down by his family, the false destroyed by the truth that had been in front of him all along without him realising it. I also agree that Percy would have that focussed, hell-bent, obsessed edge to him that would allow him to spiral into madness under the pressure and grief. The Ron/Harry hints at the end were particularly sad, especially since, like so many other things, Ron did not recognise those feelings for what they truly were until they dragged him away. A magnificent darkfic indeed.
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