This was so cute. I loved it! You are an awesome author for sure.

holy crap, this is good

YOU ARE SO PERRRRFFEEEXCCTTTTT I AM DEAÄDDDDDDD

AAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW This was so cute!

That was adorable!

Oh, now that is absolutely adorable. It's cute and fluffy without toeing the lines of characterization. Simply FANTASTIC. I love it!

AWW.

I... just... no words.
Beautiful fic is beautiful. o3o

You pulled it off, though. Go geeks. (What? I'm reading Teen Titans fanfic. I hit "geek" some time ago.)

There were punctuation errors, but this was a good story.

Erhmagahd! I love this :) nooooooo one does BB's POV right and it's sooo frustrating because his is the cutest to read :). Oh and I almost died with the catnip thing haha. Niiiiiice. Lol not sure why Raven smells like jam, but I could def see that... So cool. I'm going to go read more of your stories if you possess more in fanfics I like :) wheeeeeeee! Last note: i like that you addressed BB and Terra without terra bashing, I mean, I hate the girl for hating him but she wasn't a bad person

Gar's perspective is hard indeed. But you did a good job of making him laid back and a little immature, without making him stupid. Raven started off in-character and then drifted out in the second half of the story. I'm having a difficult time getting behind this jam association that's come up in several stories now, but I do very much like the catnip idea. How very sneaky of Raven to lure Gar in like that!

Some specific comments:

"Our local mall has the biggest bookshop sans newsagency sans comic book store you've seen. Their motto is 'If its on paper, we've got it'."

The word "sans" means 'without', which is the opposite of what I think you intended to say.

The fourth sign: Haha I like that the 'sign' is Cyborg spelling it out for him. Can't be much more clear than that! But I give you props for the depth you gave Beastboy by referencing and contrasting his feelings for Terra.

"Who said comic geeks can't get the girl?"

That reminds me of the American Hi-Fi song "The Geeks Get the Girls". The feel of the song suits your story pretty well, too. Maybe you had it in mind when you were writing.

Aaawww... cute. Love it, so sweet. Awesome. BB/Rae rocks.
My favourite sign... that would have to be... sign three, with the different scents and stuff. Awesome. Keep writing.

Awwww It's really cute ! w

I 3 it!

This was simply adorable. ;) Thank you.