I.S.M.G: this made no sense to me at all...

Hmm, very interesting. What will each son receive as their inheritence? When will the king die? Where does Puss tie into everything? Update soon!

I LOVE what dreamworks did with Puss in Boots as much as i love the origanals!

They didnt ruin anything!

Okay, first of all, Dreamworks didn't demolish it, they made an amazing movie/new-ish personality of the character.

And second, PLEASE learn how to write properly...use the grammer skills you were hopefully taught...right now, in only this very first chapter of four lines (and also the author's note) it sounds very illiterate and there is no capitalization or proper grammer or anything.

I'm not saying this story couldn't be good or that it doesn't have potential, but at this point with all the grammer mistakes, well...just try to fix it up and it might be a good story yet :)

eh. rather halfhearted. why dont you go back through each and every sentence, punctuating it and changing/adding good, captivating writing that conveys the mood of the story. then read through the thing and try adding more detail to set the scene and capture the reader.