Hi again! It's great, how Jane can win Loki over by simply understanding him, right? Better still, how well you write these two, I love it! I seriously hope you fullfill your promise of writing more Lokane because there's so few of it!

XD; The author's note at the end! ...or should I say warning? :P Admittedly, I really liked the movie...but felt it was lacking in some aspects compared to the comics. I had expected a little bit truer adapting on their parts...but it still ended up so nice that I can't really complain! For what it is, I like it. For what it was supposed to be based off of...not as much.

The idea never would have occurred to me...but I really, REALLY enjoyed this story! It surprised me in its believability and elegance. Very nice! Please keep enjoying writing, and write as much of whatever you want! ;) Maybe if I'm very lucky, I'll see when you do! I would probably read another Lokane-at least if it was from you. ;P

beautiful!

please continue!

Dear Author,

thank you very much for the story. You have a very good writing style, interesting ideas and the ability to transform them into text. Keep writing. I am impatient for you long story.

Good luck.

Love

Cyber-Akitsu

Ohmygod Loki being GODLY.

LOVE IT. SO MUCH. NEED MORE.

Amazing story with an amazing promise at the end!

Lokane? Welcome aboard! :)

Beautifully written, I love your style and the whole idea is just... wonderful.

Please keep it up!

Oh, and take a look at payheravisit comm at livejournal! (If you haven't already)

Thank you so much for this one, and can't wait for another.

Have a nice time!

Selenite :)

Love it. And please write more stories with Loki and Jane. I agree, there aren't enough stories out there with this wonderful pairing. Looking forward more of your stories with Lokane :D

Wow, intrestingly clever concept. (the praying) It is diffrent and that's what makes this story stand out. Can't wait to read more from you.

Good start I can't wait for more

This was fantastic. What beautiful imagery you depicted between Loki and Jane. I also loved the entire frame of mind you placed Loki in. I can really see this occurring and his observement of Jane.

This was really well done and beautifully written! I'm so glad you've posted this. I'm also a huge Lokane shipper as well! And the fact that you're planning more fics in the future makes me smile! There is definitely a need for more here.

I really can't wait to see what you come up with next. Again, this was really a great read with the option of potentially more. Hooray!

Thank you so much!

This is so well written and unbelievably beautiful. I mean, it's so simple and yet amazing at the same time. It's all soft and understated but really well done in the way you portrayed Loki. He's my favorite in the comicverse. And even though I didn't like to entertain this couple, it was horribly adorable. I may read more of this pair if it's going to be so interesting. Good job, mate.