Wow! Let me just say, this story is really good...and I am very impressed with all of the work you put into this story my friend...As a fellow dinosaur lover, and Jurassic Park fan, this is my favorite JP fanfic on the site!

Really good, this is one of the best Jurassic Park fics out there, one that goes past the movies, and incorporates the games and "extra" stuff. The characters other than Jorge are a little flat and predictable, and Jorge is too... Awkward. He's like 15 one moment and 40 the next. I think you need to make him more consistent. The plot is excellent, the descriptions beautifully done, you just need to work on character development, which is one if the hardest aspects of writing a story. This is very good though, and you have a TON of writing potential. Keep going! I really like this story!

I absolutely hated the Troodons, I hated this segment to be honest. Goodness knows how many times I died here. But I got to admit those Troodons were pretty awesome. As always looking forward to more. I'm looking forward to how you portray Billy's betrayal.

And then while getting their freak on Jess or someone walks in on them. Lol, though in all honest this was an awesome chapter and as always I look forward to more.

Wow Jorge way to put Sorkin on the spot there. But I absolutely loved this chapter, even if it showed my least favourite part of the game. Least Oscar died so that the other could survive.

Uh oh looks like Nima and Billy are going to have to do some explaining to Jorge. Wonder how Billy is going to react to his prying.

Yaaaaay you finally updated awesome work!

Wicked chapter, I wish I had more to say but I'm off to bed. Though this is an epic story, makes me want to play the game again, hell I think after work I'll do just that. :)

Wicked chapter. Well now they know what happened to David poor bastard. As for Jorge I think he needs a change of pants now, I know I would.

I'll give Jorge credit for going down there, I'm pretty sure I'd be too scared to even set foot down there. Awesome chapter, I would have reviewed sooner but I have been busy.

Woot another epic chapter. Poor Nima though, sure at this point she deserves to get treated badly by Jorge. But yeah awesome story.

This story is brilliant, I love the tension and Jorge is funny as hell

Ah the Bone shaker, can't tell you how many times I've died on that thing when I first started playing. And Woot the Mercs make an appearance. Which is cool, cause I always liked them. Anyhow I'm gonna go now look forward to more. Great work by the way.

Good chapter, liked the interaction between Jorge and Nima, and I liked how the Troodon kinda, sorta made an appearance. Looking forward to more.

Pretty wicked chapter, like the ending there, once again I wish I had more to say. But once again I just got off work. Looking forward to more. This story is awesome.