I love this. To me it seems like you either put a lot of thought into this or none at all. Either way, you really get the world of Gattaca (especially if it just came to you with no thought), and you produced a great piece of writing :)

oh my gosh that was just amazing... made my day. i love how the fics for gattaca are so deep. i used to read stories for really unphilosophical tv shows and stuff and this is just SO MUCH BETTER.

I was referred here by someone on Archive of Our Own, and I love this. Thank you for sharing! This is well done - cold and real, heartbreaking and hopeful. Turns my thoughts around - just what good fanfic does.

INCREDIBLE. I can't understand why I'm the first to review this. You took the characters from the movie and built something wonderful out of them. Very thought-provoking, like the movie.

You write very well! Hope to see more like this!