somehow...it felt really...unresolved? I kind of liked the character that Desmond played. If possible can you write another story with the alternative ending of Cinder together with Desmond? I think it would turn out really interesting. Thanks!

The happy moments left a warm feeling, the sad moment left me crying, and the yaoi made for a nice twist to the tale.
please, please write more fairy tales like this one.

Awwwwww that was a touching ending! Wonderful ending! It's sad, but already Cinder and Liam can finally be together forever.

I love the way you finished it. Thank you for not abandoning the fic and leaving me to die from curiosity xP very well told by the way. My most favorite fanfic ever!

O.o oh dear

so anabella is like anastasia but more mean and desmond is like drizella but less mean and hes a guy. am i right? if i am than i liked what u did:)

i like this story. especially luss. He's exactly like lucifer but more nice:)

This is great! Honestly, I love the story and the writing, and I really love the plot arc with Desmond. It seems really well-though-out, and I got the foreshadowing at the beginning of the story and, well, there it was.
I have a point to criticize, though. It feels like Liam rushing to marry Cinder is too rushed. They'd spent, what, two hours together, and he was already going "let's marry each other". It seems a tad unrealistic. The story would be perfect if it was just slowed down a notch.
That's it. Otherwise, the story's great! I really like it, keep going!

All the good that can be said about this fic has been said, all I can do is repeat the many words of praise offered by others and beg for more. Keep up the excellent work! And thank you for the profiles if its not a problem I'd like to see done for the rest if the characters as well.

Ohhhhhh so will Cinder and Liam be able to make their happy ending afterall? More please!

Desmond x Cinder forever! xDDD

I still love Desmond -/- Yay Desmond! AND YAY PROFILES

Why is it the more I read the more I want?! Your writing has captivated me in a powerful way, more then any other fic I've read so far. Please keep up the great work.

Oh no! Will true love survive in this harsh storm? What will Desmond say to Liam about Cinder? More please!

More! Lol
Is it wrong that I'm rooting for Desmond? .-.
I mean, I think he truly loves Cinder- just can't show it properly.
Who can blame him?
His father probably only taught him shrewd things of the sort.
But it may just be the 'everyone has a soft side' that I always hope for.
Love the triangle of Desmond x Cinder x Princey-boy.
Anyway, more to the point, love the story!