| Reviews for WHN Return To Fiji |
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kaleen1212 1/8/12 . chapter 10Good story. Thanks for writing an Ironside fiction. |
kaleen1212 1/8/12 . chapter 10Good story. Thanks for writing an Ironside fiction. |
julieo 1/3/12 . chapter 10 great story! loved your description of Ed as a pirate with: "his five o'clock shadow, the damaged shirt, his bandaged arm". ahhhh! please write more soon. x |
Charlotte 1/2/12 . chapter 10 Thoroughly enjoyed your story! Thank you |
lemonpig73 12/31/11 . chapter 9Poor Chief, you're not very nice with him but I love your story! Please post again soon. :) |
bluesybelge 12/25/11 . chapter 8Poor Chief. This certainly isn't going to make him love your beautiful country. :-) |
kaleen1212 12/24/11 . chapter 8Oh to have had him and to lose him again! Now they have to start all over again. Can't wait to see what happens next. |
charlotte 12/24/11 . chapter 8 Great update! I love your writing! |
bluesybelge 12/23/11 . chapter 7Exciting that's what it is. |
bluesybelge 12/17/11 . chapter 5Suspense is all around. I read it and feel like I'm there too. The places you name. I've been there even if it was a long time ago. And yes... the Via Mala is beautiful. Ah die schöne Schweiz. Jeder mal dass ich durch ihren Land fahre auf dem weg nach Italien denke ich: hier möchte ich so gerne wohnen. |
kaleen1212 12/16/11 . chapter 5Another cliff hanger. Was one of those the car Ed saw the chief in? Next chapter please. |
kaleen1212 12/16/11 . chapter 5Another cliff hanger. Was one of those the car Ed saw the chief in? Next chapter please. |
kaleen1212 12/10/11 . chapter 4Good story line with a good developing plot. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Charlotte 12/10/11 . chapter 4 Interesting story which I am so enjoying! |
kaleen1212 12/5/11 . chapter 3You like those cliff hangers! Waiting to know what that message ment. |