|Reviews for Fun at the Beach|
| For Your Entertainment2 4/10/12 . chapter 1
This was one of the best lavixkanda fanfics ive read! I love how you made Kandahar whisper "I love you" at the end! It was so cute! :3 great fanfic! :D
| xtake-me-awayx 1/26/12 . chapter 1
Great stroy... but I have one problem. 'Blunette' is not a word... it is a spinoff of brunette, which is the French word for a woman with brown hair. The masculine form of that is brunet (pronounced broo nay). So you just made up your own word and in the process called Kanda a girl. Poor Kanda.
Other than that is was a great story.. and I'm sorry if I sound snooty, I really don't mean to, I just hate the fact that English stole French words and fucked them up in the process.
| onebecamenone 12/1/11 . chapter 1
For the record, i know Kanda is older, but i obviously switched it around.
| OniNiceBrain 12/1/11 . chapter 1
The story is very sweet, and not to be frank or anything but Kanda actually is two months older than Lavi c: