Ok thank god no cancer!
Nice dancing scene!
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Nice and true story from aarif. Poor Lorelei! I can really feel for her, hope for the best...

Great chapter! I like the idea of Rory having several realationships before returning to SH. It gives the story a ralistic backgound. Like!

You have a very nice style, and by the way, i tried the trick, it works ...:-)

Nice opening, but the blonde? Really?
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Interesting! I am looking forward to reading more

i love love love this story! please update soon!

This is such a good story! I read through all the chapters you have right now twice and ate up every single word! I really hope you update this soon cause I'm going crazy with the wait of finding out what Ariaf needs help with and how Jess will go with this. I also really love how you're playing out Jess and Rory's relationship and I would love to see how planning their wedding day and the wedding day itself went. Please keep writing and someday finish this story cause it's too good to give up on.

What a surprise! Your Paris sounded a lot like the Paris of ASP, except I sincerely doubt that that Paris would perform any kind of surgery after drinking. She was definitely not this kind of risk taker. But I love the whole Aarif/Jess/Rory dynamic, and Paris' rambling about terrorist/potato eating was hilarious. I think I keep falling more in love with your Jess every chapter.

I am absolutely delighted with this story's plot and pace I really cannot form words... I read this last night and had full intentions to review when I promptly fell asleep only to have a strange dream where I was reading a book (your story). This image was then juxtaposed against the action of the book I was reading and it was by far the strangest thing I've ever dreamed. Awesome nonetheless because in a way I got to live out the vivid images you present here. I think that basically attests to your writing skills. Can't wait to know what is going on with Aarif. And Rory's got some interesting one am cravings. Hm... Can't wait for the next! Your updating frenzy is spoiling me.

I love the way you write and the plot. I just watched GG season 3 ep 20 where Jess left for California and not even saying anything to Rory when they met on the bus. I've seen that episode so many times but I can still feel my heart breaking every time I see that scene. Painful! Anyways, your story has successfully taken my mind away from the absurdity of the way the show not ending with Rory and Jess being together. Keep writing please! I'm a fan!

I want to know what's up with Aarif. Anyways I love this story so much! Keep up the great work!:)

I was so surprised when I went to my email and saw that you had updated so quickly. I understand the feeling of impatience myself :). This was my fave part:

'Am I insufferable?' she asked guiltily.

Jess' eyebrows lifted slightly and he leaned over her shoulder on his way to the corridor.

'Intolerable,' he smirked against her neck and left a light kiss over her pulse spot before moving on to the corridor.

Rory pouted emphatically and his smirk grew wider as he bent to tie his snickers.

'I'm a masochist,' he explained with a shrug and stood up, ready to go.

If he had to be honest, such kind of torture he would gladly welcome for the rest of his life.

'My hero,' Rory elated as she watched Jess go out. 'And audacious grapefruit supplier,' she added and heard him chuckle.

For a second, I was wondering if you were going to make Rory pregnant. Hm...

just so you know, i've been exhausted at work all day today because I couldn't stop reading your story!

I am really curious now what Aarif needs, and why in the world he was spying on Jess, of all people. You did a great job of keeping my interest in this story! It's not ONLY a romance but also a mystery.