| Reviews for Bath |
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mxm 1/1/13 . chapter 1 This is why I love ShikaIno, lol. They have the best sort of relationship. So much potential. |
cozieatbrains 10/28/12 . chapter 1noooo! this tickled my imagination. i want mooree this just sooo good :( you are soo good. please please continue or make a side fic or something.. *sigh* |
Limy 8/21/12 . chapter 1 I love you so much for writting this ! :0 |
inoloverbest 8/13/12 . chapter 1 wow kinda like a joke somthing |
Animefangirl95 7/16/12 . chapter 1That was cute haha |
fredanddracosgirl 6/29/12 . chapter 1I like how you make us guess what Temari told Ino.. loved it |
Anonymous 6/26/12 . chapter 1 Oh Shika, way to avoid the question. ;D Definitely in character, haha, and super cute! |
grotesqueries 5/2/12 . chapter 1Very in character in a flighty sort of way. Good job! I do wonder what Temari said that caused Ino to react in such a way, though. |
Athena 2/20/12 . chapter 1 Hahaha, priceless ending! Shika is such a tease! Wonderful job, I'm loving your ShikaIno stories! |
MysticRuins22 1/13/12 . chapter 1I like this! Very nice! |
TheMissMalave 12/2/11 . chapter 1if this was a fanfiction is would be so epic and loving it 3 |
Wolfinny van Claudius 11/27/11 . chapter 1This was amazing yet endearingly sweet. I love the way you write Ino; I love your writing style - it's amazingly unique. Your stories are always well written and this is no exception. Nice work! xx Dorki |
Wroathe 11/27/11 . chapter 1Hello! Do you recognize me? Maybe? Maybe not? Regardless, I’d like to give you a review for such a magnificent piece of literature! First, I love how personal this is. I mean, I understand that Ino’s a bit more promiscuous than the other kunoichi (anime-wise, at least), but I would think even she would voice a bit of object to having someone present with her while she’s bathing. To have Shikamaru there was just… it was so personal, and I felt like you accurately captured the friendship that Team ten embodies. I just loved it; if I ever wanted to imagine a scene where there was ShikaIno—and trust me, I do, this would be it. Second, I love Ino’s jealousy. You captured it perfectly, and while I think it’s a tiny bit out of character for Shikamaru to approach her (I wouldn’t think he wouldn’t bother, deeming it as far too “troublesome”; unless, that is, Temari’s involvement was a direct cause of their weakening bond, but that didn’t seem to be the case here, as I believe Shikamaru was chasing her as a way of consolation more so than that of patching a relationship), it was not astronomical. Third, I loved the end. Freaking. Loved. It. Shikamaru, avoiding a question? God, I love you. So much. You’re one of my favorite writers! Also, Shikamaru totally didn't answer because she is a whore. But that's okay, because she's his whore,and that makes it special. -insert cheeky smile here?- (And in conclusion, since I’ve gotten WAY off topic, this was one helluva story. It made me smile, and the idea was quite charming. Keep it up, hun!) Yours truly, Wroathe |
FFNRocks 11/27/11 . chapter 1 Really really good. More please. |
Lana0605 11/27/11 . chapter 1I like it:) |