Hmmm...its okay. Sorta hard to read. I don't agree, Eric & Topanga wouldn't go on a road trip together. Get some details in there. Otherwise, it's pretty good. Please read my stories.

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good! Please write more soon! The only thing i saw was that you said that the accident was the worst in Pennsylvania history. And that they didn't talk until they crossed into California. Thats an awful long time to not talk. Check out my story. Its about Cory and Topanga having triplets! Please write more!

i thought it was ok, only i don't think this would happen in boy meets world. I recommend that you use smaller paragraphs cuz it really hard to read

Hey,

Just thought it would be nice to be your first reviewer. It was a great story, but I don't think that Topanga would ever go on a road trip with Eric!