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evil-mastermind666
2008-11-05 . chapter 2
I don't think Potions is very Squib-acessible at all. If a Muggle were to put the exact same ingredients into a cauldron the exact same way as a wizard, it shouldn't work because there's no magic to make it work. It'd just be a cauldron full of mess. If a Squib were able to channel his or her magic into the potion though, I suppose it would work. It is very much an instinctive thing however.
evil-mastermind666
2007-01-03 . chapter 8
Wow, nicely done! He really does have an interesting position in the school.
Perhaps soon his "home" feeling will include others... though I figured at least two would be on his home list. Two cats, to be precise, :P.
evil-mastermind666
2007-01-03 . chapter 5
Baby unicorns and rainbows in SNAPE'S mind?? Merlin's big toe! It's horrifying, horrifying!
evil-mastermind666
2007-01-03 . chapter 4
"Taking Minerva’s hand in mine seemed like the most natural thing in the world. I wished to comfort her."

-huge grin- You did that on purpose! Oh boy Filch, you're in denial, and not that river in Egypt! :P Lurve is in the air... and I'm psyched about it.
SoloMoon
2005-10-22 . chapter 1
I love your stories, especially the way that you portray Snape! You make him realistic but at the same time look at a side of him that we never see in the books.
duj
2004-04-24 . chapter 8
Snape with Azoth, very cute and so in character.
lazily not signed in under Demona168
2003-05-18 . chapter 8
Lol to lazy to log in.. but not lazy enough to reveiw awonderful story! i loved it!! I love all your squib stories!
Calandra Facete
2003-04-24 . chapter 8
Azoth is a purr-fect name for the black one. A kitten will be good for Snape, I think he was pleased but doesn't want to admit it. I am happy Callandra got sorted into Gryffindor, she is a perfect fit there, brave, kind, and talented. I like how the two "magicless" squibs have powers that the wizards don't have, but then nature loves equilibrium.
Calandra Facete
2003-04-24 . chapter 5
A Cheering Charm is probably the worst punishment for Snape, why didn't anyone think of it sooner. Poor Sirius though, a face full of quills is worse that being happy for a couple days. When the two of them get together, they act like eight year olds. I think deep down they respect each other. I only say that because their situation reminds me of the one between me and my arch rival, we bicker constantly but he's really like a brother.
Calandra Facete
2003-04-24 . chapter 2
You are right on about Callandra's expectations at Hogwarts, as many have noted. There are some areas that don't require much wand magic (astonomy could also be added to your already long list). Even Muggles might have more magic in them than they are given credit for (or at least my sister who is wiccan would argue so!). I think that the dilemma Draco is in is facsinating, I wonder what he'll do. I also wonder what compells wizards to join Voldemort, it's not as if it's a glamorous occupation.
oOwth
2003-01-26 . chapter 8
awwww baby kittens. I wish I could have one. hehe. I wonder what Snape's kitten is going to do to him. ^_^ good work. again, you must get these stories up at FAP if you havn't. and if you have, why havn't you told me? and how's the uric chapter coming? Ariana told me that you two were working together.
tintinnabulation
2002-12-19 . chapter 8
Are you going to write another story soon? If you do, please put Callandra in it. She is a neat original character.

Completely off the subject, I finished "Loose Ends" with a proper happy ending. You seemed to think the last chapter was the end, so I thought you'd like to know that.
Aeryn Alexander
2002-12-01 . chapter 8
This was so great! I really enjoyed your original characters (Callandra and the Morgan sisters). I thought it was very cool that Callandra was sorted into a house. The way you wrote Sirius Black was very interesting (although he's not a favorite of mine in anyone's stories). Filch's perspective, as always, is extremely fascinating. And Draco ... I really want to see him become someone different than his father too, and just maybe Snape can help him. Oh, well, it may be years before that comes up in the books. Still, I've really enjoyed your stories!!
Elspeth1
2002-05-28 . chapter 8
Hi! I'm back from Switzerland and catching up on everything I've missed over the past week and a half.

First, I just have to gush. Aww! The kittens are so CUTE! (and so is Snuffles--"Do you, by any chance, have your camera with you?"--*snicker*). I love all of their names, especially Azoth's. Obscure, intellectual, and it sounds like it belongs to a demon. Perfect for Snape's kitten.

The Azoth-Severus interaction is *ducks in adavnce to avoid the curse Snape will surely send her way* absolutely adorable. "Bile black demon" indeed! I would bet money that that thing is going to sleep on Snape's bed. On top of him. Digging it's claws in and out and purring.

And I really liked the end of the chapter (GO Filch! And Moody!). All the readers, of course. already knew that Filch belonged to/with/in the castle, but of course, being Argus the self-esteem-free, he had to have it proven to him. And speaking of Moody, are he and Sirius going to persuade Filch to try out the door on "Snuffles"? Or are later circumstances going to force them into it?
Akimekura Amura
2002-05-27 . chapter 1
(today's review shall be written in German. There is a translator at translate.google.com/translate_t )

Atheis: Guten tag!! Wie seien Sie?

Aeris: Ich bin guten. Wie seien Sie?

Atheis: Nicht You!!! Dummkopf!!

Aeris: *pouts* You seien nicht nett...

Atheis: Ja... Ich wissen *grins evilly*

Aeris: Guten Story... Ich liebe sie! Ich muß mehr lesen!

Atheis: Ja, mich auch.

Aeris: *goes to click the next button*

Atheis: NEIN!!! NICHT JETZT!! Ich muß sagen Auf Wiedersehen...

Aeris: Entschuldige mich... *rolls eyes*

Atheis: Auf Wiedersehen!! *Waves*
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