I finally finished the story, I've had a lot of mixed feelings with this, my muse often dropping, only to be gained back as I read though the story, this is pretty descent reading with a few minor problems that can be ignored, I feel that this last chapter was an excellent way to end it, especially the extra detail you put into this. You grabed and fused a lot of worlds together with a lot of extra surprises.

overall, grand work.

ok I didn't want to log on right now, but tomorrow I will have an OC, its related to Ridley, but its not a clone, its a hybrid of his and another race, I will review under the same name, but as a member, any way cool story keep up the good work.

Eh, after the cross overs I really didn't like this. But like I had asked, could you have edited to write him out and him just not disappear w/o warning.

hi I have an oc for you

name:jack heron
eyecolor gold when nutral red when angry and black when in battle
haircolor silver

wepon plasma sword

was kidnaped as a child and subjected to genitic modifacations wict includ superhuman healing, ability to see throgh walls and can see the not so distant futer but keeps it a secrit so people whont ask him whats going to happen all the time

I will admit, the quality has decreased, and seriously, Mhat still has disappeared w/o a trace.
also
Will he turn the universe 2D, and jump around in 3D I finally payed attention and got that

Only on chapter 13 so far, but what the f***? Oh boy. This story is a screwed up mess. I cannot help but laugh though. Oh boy. I'm so confused.

Can you give a good reason on how he's dead. Sort of weird him just disappearing w/o explaination. and now to wait 3 months for a short chapter.

Oyyy...This is Metroid, not Kingdom Hearts...too much crossover...My head hurts.

Where is Mhat. Also, sonic '06?

Nice of you to have come back, it was about time as well.
Please continue this story.

This was supposed to be the Tales chapter?

Not bad dude! And don't kill X-Sol now,we need him alive...as a villain that stalks the heroes. XD And welcome back ARD.

Cuz I'm never satisfied with my penname?

U never said there was a deadline :(

Name: Aurora

Species: Zebian/space pirate

personality: sometimes lazy other times loves to teleport in circles around his opponets while insulting them and telling them about his life, Very SNARKY! Ridley's right hand man.

Others: like Swaddlum from the space pirate confederation but ten times more annoying, can you ship him with someone?

You do sucky sonic but no awesometastic Halo? :( Zoe X Sam Plz! XD