very good can't wait for the next chapter.

ravenclaw-owl

slytherin-Basalisk

Griffindor-lion/Hat

Hufflepuff-have no idea these are all just guesses please tell me if i am right or not.

Its fantastic!

what going to happen next

Interesting story. Looking forward to reading more.

Rose would be two years behind Harry as she was born on 31 October and the cut off date seems to be 31 August. That is why Hermione is almost a year older than Harry

While the concepts great and the story is sound their are a few problems. For one the story has some grammar issues along with spelling mistakes. Another thing is this story is loosing what little flow it had to begin with and is being rushed. Finally while you give detail and context, you lack interest and color as well as support. My advice is have a little more fun with the writing and try to describe it exactly how you invision it. What colors were the walls? How did rose feel as she came in to the common room and got hugged? Why does she hate being called heir? Think about stuff like this and translate the answers in your text. Make it an artwork not a piece of paper as my teacher would say. I reserve final review untill the end but untill then you have 2.5 out of 5 stars.

I love this fanfic! The Rose has to stay with Harry he does not match me to Rose Hermione and Harry are very cute together and over time you could for fights between the two by jealousy. Also fights with James and Lily's relationship with Harry Rose and their disagreements with Harry's parents.

Hello. I am the editor for rrussia. We are trying to make everything perfect for you guys but it is hard because rrussia and I have a ton of work to do daily. If you have any questions for me, PM rrussia (I dont have a account for fanfic) and I will get back to yall asap. Also, under rrussias account name, I have a story called Amissa and will love it if you tell me what you think about it :)

I liked your extension potion idea and it's concept. I honestly think if your got an editor and moved slower this would be a great story.

I also have a feeling your trying to get to a certain point in the story or in the Harry potter series in general.

I find this true because the chapters felt like prolongs. As in giving a general back story so people won't get confussed when the part you want to do is written.

If it takes you a year to get all this edited and get chapter 5

I would still be happy but until then or sooner if you get it done this story Is confussing and crap

2 out of 5 because the concept and actual story is awesome

your grammers bad, you forget words and everything moves too fast. Over all this story is completely crap. oh and you leave out too much detail

I think Ravenclaw'll do best. But make it like she almost got slytherin, being Voldy's child.

Update soon please (' u ' )o

Decent plot base, but needs extreme editing.

Rose would not get her Hogwarts letter as she is two months too young and will have to wait another year. It will be interesting to see where this goes.

good chapter cant wait for the next chapter

good so far, I cant wait till the one faithful night he over heard, something no one should know except for some.