Your writing is addicting.

While I am not a terribly huge fan of fan-fiction (because 10% of the good stuff is hard to find because it's hidden through 90% of crap), I found this story awesome. I like Metal Gear Solid (and I'm also a Nintendo fanboy, with a PS2! HOLY SH*T!), and the duck scene made laugh, hard.

The only thing I found to be a huge flaw was Meryl being OOC, however... I read Working For Work before this story, and it explained alot.

Awwww. Thanks for the shout out!

*LOL* This was great! There is so much good stuff in here, I can't address it all. Heh heh I really like the fact that you made the Colonel a perv. That whole thing with Snake wanting a new fork was hilarious. At least you didn't have Roy saying that he had carpal tunnel in his left hand or something like that. I'm still laughing about the money for the expensive skin creme.

The way Ocelot cooked the ducks was sheer brilliance. It's a good thing he uses generators. Could you imagine what his electricity bill would be otherwise. *LOL* I also take it you don't like Meryl that much. All the barbs on her were still funny though (even though I think her and Snake are adorable). I also liked the fact that every one had there own agenda for attending the dinner. Keep up the great work. And you definitely need to write about them at Otacon's place.

Ha ha ha! Oh man, it was funny, and expertly written. I love it! Damn funny story!

This is one of THE funniest fanfics I've ever read based off of the Metal Gear Solid series ever. Though I thought the part with the ducks behing "cooked" on Ocelot's torture machines was taking it a little too far with dark comedy, I still thought this was hilarious. Please write a sequel to this that takes place at Otacon's house! And make sure the Colonel doesn't get his horny hands on some of Otacon's hentai!

Hey, good story again! The light dimming part was hilarious! I wanna see the next installment!

Yosh