Reviews for Lonely Beginning
Froyo3 4/13/13 . chapter 4
I gotta know what happens next so please please write the next chapter! Please!
Night-Waker 12/17/12 . chapter 4
That can't be it! I wanna see Vera get what she deserves and what happens to Alice and Nny!
MissMewRingo 10/23/12 . chapter 3
Thank you so much for your kind review! I love your story! Also: if you have trouble coming up with ideas, you can use stuff from my last chapter of Naraku no Hana. Just be sure to have fun with this! MMR
Invader Glow 10/13/12 . chapter 4
This was awesome. My life is like that only I saw my grandparents die in front of my eyes!
Just a person 9/22/12 . chapter 4
Really loved this! You should definitely write more chapters. At least it's something original and not completely crappy. :3
Jem F 8/28/12 . chapter 4
nice; i like this so far.
Limphidora 8/10/12 . chapter 2
I'm gonna cry, just so much emotion. It's not a bad thing, I've read many fanfics lacking emotion. And I congratulate you on making me cry
MissMewRingo 8/1/12 . chapter 2
Awesome. Vera is a bitch, and I hope she gets hit by a semi truck. Poor Johnny, I felt the same after my great Grandma passed away.
PsYcHoGaMeR164 7/27/12 . chapter 3
Uh oh troubles coming.

Hmm but maybe and this is only a opioun that the next time they show up instead of saying Psycho Doughboys full name you just use D-boy cause hes only a shadow now and he doesn't get a body till Nny's in like High Skool or so.
PsYcHoGaMeR164 7/27/12 . chapter 1
Poor boy.

But I can imagine Johnny being just like Squee before that only his parents actually give a damn about him.

This is really good.
Shadow the Ranger 7/24/12 . chapter 4
Fantastic! When is the next chappie coming out?
MissMewRingo 7/18/12 . chapter 1
Thank you for your kind review! I also loved your stories too! You have also reinspired me and I am currently drafting this next chapter, so I'll update when I'm back from Florida!
Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 3
I really liked this chapter. You have a very smooth way of writing. It flows perfectly. :) I really, really hope that Nny's aunt gets what's coming to her... can't wait for the next upload.
BAYALE 7/2/12 . chapter 3
FINALLLY! Oh my GOSH seeing this bloody brilliant thing in my inbox made my entire morning! You have no idea how amazing this was my friend, TRUST ME!
Jem Fukuyama 4/25/12 . chapter 2
aww poor johnny! is it bad to think he's just so adorable in this chapter. XP i dont like vera, she ticks me off. but i actually know someone like that.
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