| Reviews for Lonely Beginning |
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Froyo3 4/13/13 . chapter 4 I gotta know what happens next so please please write the next chapter! Please! |
Night-Waker 12/17/12 . chapter 4 That can't be it! I wanna see Vera get what she deserves and what happens to Alice and Nny! |
MissMewRingo 10/23/12 . chapter 3Thank you so much for your kind review! I love your story! Also: if you have trouble coming up with ideas, you can use stuff from my last chapter of Naraku no Hana. Just be sure to have fun with this! MMR |
Invader Glow 10/13/12 . chapter 4This was awesome. My life is like that only I saw my grandparents die in front of my eyes! |
Just a person 9/22/12 . chapter 4 Really loved this! You should definitely write more chapters. At least it's something original and not completely crappy. :3 |
Jem F 8/28/12 . chapter 4 nice; i like this so far. |
Limphidora 8/10/12 . chapter 2I'm gonna cry, just so much emotion. It's not a bad thing, I've read many fanfics lacking emotion. And I congratulate you on making me cry |
MissMewRingo 8/1/12 . chapter 2Awesome. Vera is a bitch, and I hope she gets hit by a semi truck. Poor Johnny, I felt the same after my great Grandma passed away. |
PsYcHoGaMeR164 7/27/12 . chapter 3Uh oh troubles coming. Hmm but maybe and this is only a opioun that the next time they show up instead of saying Psycho Doughboys full name you just use D-boy cause hes only a shadow now and he doesn't get a body till Nny's in like High Skool or so. |
PsYcHoGaMeR164 7/27/12 . chapter 1Poor boy. But I can imagine Johnny being just like Squee before that only his parents actually give a damn about him. This is really good. |
Shadow the Ranger 7/24/12 . chapter 4Fantastic! When is the next chappie coming out? |
MissMewRingo 7/18/12 . chapter 1Thank you for your kind review! I also loved your stories too! You have also reinspired me and I am currently drafting this next chapter, so I'll update when I'm back from Florida! |
Guest 7/2/12 . chapter 3 I really liked this chapter. You have a very smooth way of writing. It flows perfectly. :) I really, really hope that Nny's aunt gets what's coming to her... can't wait for the next upload. |
BAYALE 7/2/12 . chapter 3FINALLLY! Oh my GOSH seeing this bloody brilliant thing in my inbox made my entire morning! You have no idea how amazing this was my friend, TRUST ME! |
Jem Fukuyama 4/25/12 . chapter 2aww poor johnny! is it bad to think he's just so adorable in this chapter. XP i dont like vera, she ticks me off. but i actually know someone like that. |