Poor AJ abd Luster...hopefully they'll get thier baby soon...please keep going!

This looks like a good start though I ponder about the ones in the elephants role who would stunned the poor Fire-Blossom. Can you have the rest of AJ's friends be extras or the only ponies who has sympathy on the poor dear? Continue when you can.

aw don't worry, Apple Jack and Luster, you'll get your baby soon.

Very interesting start, and I'm pretty sure Applejack and Luster will have their baby soon. Great job and good luck!:)

Poor Applejack and Luster. Not to worry, they'll be expecting their baby.