Great story! I wish yu would continue it but its still an excellent story

Holy shit , I love this write more _

Nice. Keep up the good work. 3

i really enjoyed this, liked how you made babydoll a lesbian, well liked is the wrong word. It was original in a good way :)X

I like it; Babydoll got her revenge on the priest (who was a form of her stepfather) through Sweet Pea and her sister lives. I'd like to read your next upcoming story.

i like this story it has a happier ending than the actual movie i would love a sequeal thankyou

Hi,

wow thats a really good chapi :) I love how u writte and I like this story really good :) I hope u will continue this story soon

Umm, interesting how the “priest” - who in the film can be seen as make-believe - is the bad guy. The sense of mystery about this is a good feature. This fic doesn't “suck”, but it does remind me of the sort of melodrama in soap operas or Gothic romances. Otherwise, some pretty dark stuff is hinted at; perhaps, the story should have been longer and explored some of it. Wow, good surprise in this - didn't see that coming! (Don't hold back a better fic!)