This is really one of the best GM/M stories I have ever read! Congrats on the writing, reallt suggestive and tastefull. Great work.

Great! I loved the tension and awkwardness.

This was great! Honestly, it's one of the only GM/M stories I can find and out of those it's the best! I love how you detailed George-Michael in the beginning and both of their trains of thought when it comes to the other one. I can't wait to see where their relationship goes in Season 4!

So, the first time I read this story I had just finished all three seasons of the show, awkwardly shipping for George Michael and Maeby. I read this story and, for someone as not-so-innocent as myself, I blushed profusely and, although enjoying the fic, walked out for the time being. However, the story lingered with me as being incredibly well written, so eventually I told myself "Suck it up, Buttercup!" and read it again and favorited it.

Now, I'm coming back to say that I've added this story to the Reviews' Lounge, Too story archive to help you get more reviews. AD doesn't have a gigantic following in Ficdom and the show's just two hundred kilos of epic, so I had to add it in. It's an impeccably written, witty and overall skillful tale of youthful and then adult lust and how it boiled over. Vague to a point, focusing in the present only when needed, but a large tale told succinctly and, yes, very steamily.

Good work!

this was incredible! you captured the buzzy excitement of their attraction so well. the part about Maeby's skin was ridiculously hot. my only critique is that I wish you had expanded the end!

I really like this. Its very mature-kinda hot- and Maeby is perfect. GM seems a little OoC but thas fine, becsuse we never saw how he'd be as an adult.

I like the style of this piece. The lack of dialogue is interesting, the way it all leans on present tense narrative and inner thoughts. It's worth continuing if you have any further ideas. If not, it also has a solid conclusion.

Wow amazing! A second chapter?

Great sexual tension! Very nicely done!