Good story. Enjoyed it immensely

I really enjoyed this story. It was a very interesting POV to read and very well written.

Hey! This has been one of my favorite fics for a long time and I just now realised that I'd never reviewed it. When I first came into this fandom, I found your work and was astounded. It all seems so perfect. This story ranks very high with me for a number or reasons (perhaps nostalgia in part.) It really did seem like something that could happen, and I love the way you portray Harper. It's so different for some reason, but still not so far off from cannon that you would think it couldn't happen. I love it. Great job! It makes me sad that you haven't written Andromeda works for a while.

OMG! I LOVED this! How could Tyr hit Harper? Very well written-you just have to love both guys, don't you?

Aw... this is such a beautiful fic, it almost made me cry. Poor Harper, nobody has the right to do that to him or anybody... *sniff* Its good that Tyr realized what he did wrong and talked to Harper...

wow, with the exception of a few grammatical errors, that was a great fic.

Great story! You pictured the relationship between Harper and Tyr just the right way! And the night vision was really cool (I wish I had that)!

-cough-he loves harper-cough-...now, I love your writng cuz it seems to have a simple bit of TyrHarper, yet you don't make it obvious...or maybe only I can see it because I look for it...hm...it could use some yaoi, though...I mean-choke- um...I'm no pervert! I'm just...special...?...urg...continue with the awesome writing, yer a very good author!

i've read it before, but didn't review then.
i know what Tyr's feeling, though, i get really frustrated and take it out on the next person to get in my way, then feel bad about it later.
its an awesome story, i love the way you write, you really draw the reader in and keep them on the edge.

wow

ahhhh! that was sad! you made me cry! (*sniffle) it was very good, though, i must admit. (*weep)

Great job. The emotions are believable for both Harper and Tyr, and even for Beka in her role as Harper's protector. You make us remember that even Tyr has lost much of what he had - I can see him being very protective of his remaining possesions and being completely oblivious to how a Human raised around Niets might become a victim; it would probably never occur to him to do what was done to Harper. I'm glad they could patch up the trust between them, though you are right - it will take a long time to heal entirely.

I've read this story at another site but I was too lazy to send feedback via e-mail.

I love this and all of your stories.

The only thing I wish was different...I wish Harper HADN'T stolen from Tyr. Perhaps a misunderstanding where someone else took it for some reason. It fell to the floor and underneath something. In his bad mood, Tyr forgot that he had taken it somewhere. I just prefer completely undeserved owies instead of those that have even slight justification. *sigh* :o)

You're probably my fav Andromeda author. Keep up the good work and POST ANOTHER CHAPTER OF 'THE DIARIES'!

You have got to be the best author at this site. And this is the second best story I've read here so far. (The other being your other story "The Diaries" which I also reviewed.") Hope you don't plan on quiting any time soon, I'm looking forward to your next story.

That was REALLY good. I felt bed for Harper, that was so awful what he had to go through! But I felt bad for Tyr too, even though he was wrong to blow up on Harper like that, it was still sad to see the entire crew turn against him. I'm glad Tyr and Harper made up in the end.