This is brilliant! I love your adaptation of the later seasons to include Rose, and how you've kept the balance between following canon and not just re-writing episodes, which gets boring. Your pairings are adorable, and the details you bring into your characters are great. I'd love to read more, if you're still writing this...

Hoping for an update!

I just finished this whole thing and came back here to comment because this chapter held the most relevant stuff to what I had to say. First off this whole thing is really good and a lot of fun. This section especially was great because River is an awesome character and her interactions with both of them were great.

That in mind, and the rest of the story taken into consideration, I would love it if you actually had River end up with the Doctor and Rose. There have been a number of things you have said that could lead to that conclusion, including something Lee says in a later chapter. So if you chose that route, it would be great but regardless I will read it as there is a lot of fun going on in this. The relationships and interrelationships are epic.

One of my favorite bits is the fact that you have Jenny calling Rose Mum. That is awesome. I totally dig that.

Thanks again and I will be looking forward to more.

You should look over the CAL/Library chapters again, as far as I know you named the kids Hazel and Arthur already

Glad to see an update!

Good chapter!

I love this.

sweet chapter :D I know Rose and the Doctor will save the kids.

So happy this story was updated! Love it!

So glad you updated, I really love this story ad it was worth the wait. Loved that Rose punched the lady in red, I'm really excited for the next part. :-)

"Are you my mummy?" :D

Great! Can't wait for more!

Nice chapter! I think you really hit home with Donna's train of thought. This is simply a fantastic story, and I cna't wait for the next chapter!

I'm so glad to see you're back. Well done. :)

If I wasn't already dead I would have died when I saw this in my inbox. ABOUT BLOODY TIME IZZY.

One thing: "Her daughter lived with an alien \ and his (human?)" what's with the \ ?