Love It

amazing!

I realy adore this story. I hope you write a sequil to it at some point

Great story.

Aw. I really really loved this. It was very descriptive and well written. Very nice job. I wish there was more though! I was sad to see it end. Loved it...sequel?

Dear me, this is such a beautiful story. Your powerful descriptions have captured my heart. I'm glad to have read this story of yours. You are amazing. Thank you so very much for having written a piece as wonderful as this. I'm not trying to pressure you but, I'm still looking forward to your updates. )

Until then,

Aki -

*sniff*... that was so... BEAUTIFUL! *sobs* Both characters written so perfectly! Intricate storyline! Yes there were mis-spelled words and wrong sentences but it was so amazing!*sobs again* When Haruka proposed! The destined meeting! The angst! When Haruka found out that Michiru was a mermaid! The intimate moments! *sniffle* truly a classic... a work of art so rare to see!... now I'm sad that it ended...

Beautiful. _

It really was. It was Tristan and Isolde meets the Little Mermaid meets Haruka and Michiru.

Very nice. Simple, elegant.

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Through Darkness and Light /x\

me love dis

pls pls pls update soon

Oh this was beautiful! I loved this story, it was amazing and so heart-felt. I also thank your friend for encouraging you, because otherwise I wouldn't have had the opportunity to read this story. It was fantastic!Neptune's Mask

Wow, it's really good.

Just one thing, I didn't understand this

"Amoureux d'Inturnal, le vent au mer sûrement."

I know it's french. but it's not real french, ne? Can you tell me what you mean by that? Maybe I'll be able to translate it for you.

ever listen to the tales of legendia song "battle artist"? i thought it fit perfectly with some parts in your story, you should listen to it sometime (and anyone else who would want to). )

I believe you can get the mp3 at

(number 116 I think)

There's a lot of battle music to it, reminds me of Haruka fighting the evil dude. Parts in the song like at 2:44,2:45 to 3:05 you can imagine when Haruka and Michiru joining (first part represents Haruka and the softer one, well you can guess). Check it out. If the site loads up too slow I can always upload it for you and send you the link. Great writing by the way. _b

sequel? PLEZ WRITE A SEQUEL! XD this story is so good!

Great story! _

hey ::waves frantically:: remember me from DA? (lost-beauty) I love this story so much... can't wait to read your others! It's such an original idea... ::stares stary-eyed in awe::