I encourage you to keep writing :)

How nice to read about familial interactions. I like how you're winding the threads all together just in time to see them come completely unraveled in the coming storm.

Lovely!

And Maitimo only caught a flower? I deem that hilarious.

"Ah, Artanis, I love you."

My favorite line. I only wish Maglor could get a mention - my heart would be complete. :)

Hmm... Meeting Miriel? I wish I could do that.

But I like how Galadriel is just so innocent in this chapter. Far cry from the Lady of the Golden Wood.

Sorry I didn't sign in to review, but I thought the first part of this chapter was so beautiful.

I killed her a long time ago. Or did she kill me?"

I can just hear the regret in Galadriel's voice...

Hehe, I love how you write her as a little girl. It's adorable. :D

It seems that Nerwen is in for a broken heart, before things are over. Alas!

I really like the way you incorporate political and family dynamics into this. The way it goes right over the children's heads? Perfect!

Oh, interesting! I really like your style, and there are absolutely too few good Galadriel stories here. Looking forward to all the bits with her and Celeborn, they have always been my fav couple in LotR :)

Keep writing!

I think this is a fantastic story, and I personally like the idea behind it very much - Galadriel has always been one of my favorites, and hearing her story told in such a creative way is very entertaining :)

Can't wait for more! .

How interesting that Artanis would come across the ghost of her grandfather's wife! Doubtless it would have been a difficult shadow to live under.

What an excellent start! I really liked the way you meshed the past and present into one scene, and so lyrically, too!