|Reviews for Memories of the Present|
| Lyneel 2/19/12 . chapter 1
It s a pity that you didn't make the story longer - if you could explain things more, the story would definitely gain a lot.
and I would love to read more, of course ;)
| Solei 11/29/11 . chapter 1
Wow, that was quite... intense! doesn't desrve to be just a one shot though. :) maybe you could write another story, longer? :D