please post the Zara stories as chapters rather than seperate stories. This helps make the story easier to read and for readers to find the next part in the story. Also I believe it's in the site rules that all installments of a single story must be published in chapters rather than separate submissions. Thanks

This is really fantastic, Hannah. The voice you've created for Zara as Charlie's friend seems so plausible- it's as if she's been on the other side of his letters all along.

Poor Zara! :( For someone so young, she has alot of depth to her last statement. I'd like to see how she copes with discrimination and how it affects her character growing up. I hope she remains proud and true to herself. Excellent point of view, I really feel like I'm reading the letters o a high school girl. Keep up the good story :)